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svgurl January 5 2009, 06:00:28 UTC
Oh no! Poor Chlollie! Those awful people keep trying to split them up. Stupid Philip ... he'll never be Oliver. :(

“I told her not to take a knife to the Queen family jewels.”

She felt his warm lips curve in a small smile against her skin as they traveled over her cheek. “Thanks.”

Chloe’s breath stuttered, as her palm moved over his shirt, caressing his abdomen. “Purely selfish. I enjoy them too much.”

“And they’re all yours. You know that, right?”

Great dialogue! I love how you write them together ... which is why this split hurts so much.

I hope Chloe's okay! I'm playing catch up and it's exciting for me to have two chapters to read!

Wonderful job!

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