Hehe. Chloe's getting kidnapped but she's not going to be in any real danger. Oliver's actually the one who's going to get reeeeellly.. f*d up in this one.
You know? I'm not sure. I was trying to envision dark haired/blue eyed hunks, and nothing was coming to mind. He's good looking though, so feel free help me with casting... LOL
Josh Duhamel would work. I think his eyes are brown, but yes... you're on the right wavelength with me. :) I just did a google image search of him and found a nude photo of him *iz ded*
Another fantastic update and I loved the arguement between them him sitting on her had me chuckling. If Chloe didn't have the headache and hadn't been nearly kidnapped and put up with the press all day, she would definitely be thinking more clearly and know this was a set up. But ack Gen you end it there, thats cruel :( You had better post chapter 5 soon I am not very good at waiting.... or so I have been told lol!!
You know? I had a VERY hard time separating them. They did not want to listen to me at all. And even when they were arguing and wrestling, it was almost cute because of how well they know and love each other. Believe it or not I was laughing too.. honestly, they have conversations in my head! Their dialog is so easy to write. So I had to compromise. Keep enough discord there, so that Chloe wants to leave temporarily, knowing she'll come back to him, and they'll figure this out together.... but then.. dun, dun, dun! She's gone.
I agree with calie15, I've been anonymously following your writing for about two weeks now and I am absolutely hooked. Your writing is fantastic and I really want more; where are you? Please post more soon :).
Oh.. please don't be anonymous! LOL Thank you so much! I'm working on Chapter 5 now, and hope to have it up later tonight. I'm taking my kids out for dinner for my son's birthday, but I should have the chapter done and posted tonight. It's almost finished I just need to wrap up the chapter and go over it. Thanks again! *hugs*
LOL, expect to see lots of flame-y manips. I have the next one already made, and I haven't started writing the chapter yet. :D
It was hard separating them. So I had to compromise. Leave just enough discord there for a weekend apart. They really did not want to listen to me though. LOL It's funny how characters will take over your head like that and not want to do what you want them to. When that happens, I know I'm not on the right track, and have to change something, so that's what I did here. I'm glad it worked.
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Who are you "casting" as Philip?
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You know? I'm not sure. I was trying to envision dark haired/blue eyed hunks, and nothing was coming to mind. He's good looking though, so feel free help me with casting... LOL
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OOOOHH!
MAYBE NATHAN FILLION!
But then Philip would have to have a strong sense of humor, LOLz. Nathan ALWAYS has that.
Umm...Ian Somerhalder?
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More in a few days! :)
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And you do know that leaving it there is just mean!!!
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More in a few days! :D
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It was hard separating them. So I had to compromise. Leave just enough discord there for a weekend apart. They really did not want to listen to me though. LOL It's funny how characters will take over your head like that and not want to do what you want them to. When that happens, I know I'm not on the right track, and have to change something, so that's what I did here. I'm glad it worked.
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