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svgurl October 25 2008, 00:24:06 UTC
This was definitely worth the wait! I loved this chapter so much ... it was beautiful and hot at the same time!

Your Chloe and Ollie are just so real. I just adore the way you write them both. :D

“Better?” he teased, mischief dancing in his eyes.

“Why yes, yes it is.”

“Anything for you, Mistress Watchtower.”

Even in the steamiest of chapters, you have some lovely banter and it's definitely appreciated!

The smut was very hot and I enjoyed it a lot! And that last line made me go "awww".

Wonderful job! :D

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gen717 October 25 2008, 16:42:52 UTC
Yay! So glad you liked this. I have the hardest time with love scenes, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I'm usually biting my nails nervously after posting the sexy stuff.

Thanks so much! :)

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gen717 October 25 2008, 16:40:41 UTC
LOL, maybe I'm giving too much away with my graphics for each chapter.. but they're fun to make so it's okay, and if it made you squee a little, that's a good thing! :D

Love scenes are so hard to write for me, so when people like them, I'm relieved! :)

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angelbsb October 25 2008, 04:03:06 UTC
bravo. that was beautiful . loved there talk before they made love .PPMS

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gen717 October 25 2008, 16:44:49 UTC
Yes, I thought they needed to talk, because although it's good Oliver wants to wait, and rightly so, they have known each other for a couple of years. Chloe merely wanted to point that out and ease his mind about that part. I'm glad you liked it! :)

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jusperson October 25 2008, 07:12:40 UTC
At last, another great chapter! Chloe and Oliver are together, also at last (laughs). I hope you'll update soon. I'm dying to learn what has happened to Tess and Clark.

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gen717 October 25 2008, 16:45:08 UTC
Thanks so much! More Tess and Clark and Davis soon!

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chloequeen2009 October 25 2008, 13:43:45 UTC
WOW WOW WOW!!!! That was so hot and so gentel at the same time he wanted her to know he was all hers and no one else's can't wait till the next chapter..

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gen717 October 25 2008, 16:48:14 UTC
As wonderful as Ollie is, I think any woman wanting a serious relationship with him would be a bit leery. (I know I would, even if he is drop dead gorgeous) He really does have to prove to her that he's hers, and that she's the only one he loves, and I think he's doing just that.

More soon!

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