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Perfect ending... cold_queen_5 October 25 2008, 20:40:16 UTC
...to my catching up! A nice love scene...*sighs* They're so perfectly matched, why can't the writers see that? But nooo, they just want to keep shoving Lois/Oliver at us, or even better, Tess/Oliver. WE DON'T WANT THAT, DAMNIT.

On a side note...KILL OFF JIMMY OLSEN, STUPID SMALLVILLE!WRITERS.

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Re: Perfect ending... gen717 October 25 2008, 21:05:32 UTC
YaY! So glad you are reading and liking it. Chlollie is really perfectly matched. I have really been disappointed in the show lately, and saw Oliver screwing of Tess as very OOC. She's basically a Lex stand-in for all intents and purposes, the week before she'd told him she'd used him and he basically told her she was a ruthless bitch. Must be love, only you know.. NOT. I have no problem with them breaking down Oliver a bit. My fear is that they'll take it too far, turn him into a dick, and make me dislike him. I'd rather he screwed ten unknown women, than the villaness/Lex-stand in of the story. I thought it made him look stupid, and I was actually rooting for Tess, glad that she burned him good. It shouldn't be that way. But SV loves to rehash those dead-horse relationships, making characters act OOC, stupidly regressing, turning Chloe in to podperson, lobotomized version!Chloe, just... no thanks ( ... )

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Re: Perfect ending... cold_queen_5 October 25 2008, 21:09:46 UTC
It's okay. I do the random rant/comment thing all the time. Sometimes, you've just gotta talk it out.

I do agree. I understand that Tess/Ollie have history...but as she is undoubtedly on Lex's side of this matter it was very OOC of Ollie to try and get involved with her again. Lex is his enemy, bitter and to the very end, he'd never risk himself by becoming involved with his protege.

And you're right, that is one of the better things about Chlollie. All angst and drama comes from outside of them. Once together, you can see the two of them becoming one cohesive unit, ready to take on the world and their friends/family if need be.

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lilmoochie October 25 2008, 22:42:10 UTC
Sooo beautiful. "You have me Chloe. All of me. Don't ever doubt it." Very sweet. Great Job. This was sooo worth the wait. BTW, thanks for the advice =]

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gen717 October 26 2008, 05:08:34 UTC
Thanks! I really do get a bit nervous about the sex/love scenes, but I'm really happy you liked it. And you are welcome! Thank you for the treats! *hugs*

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enderwiggin24 October 26 2008, 12:39:37 UTC
You have me, Chloe. All of me,”

damn, that was sweet and hot, and romantic and all!

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gen717 October 26 2008, 23:44:09 UTC
Thank you! More soon! :)

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purple_moon123 October 27 2008, 05:21:00 UTC
Very awesomely hot!!!!

“Anything for you, Mistress Watchtower.”

“You have me, Chloe. All of me,”

Those were my fave lines. I just love that bantering and declarations include both identities.

Also got to agree that Ollie sleeping with Tess i.e. Lex's stand in for evil/villian makes me dislike Ollie. You might think it's weird but what really made me go WTF was where they did it. But then I probably would also be upset if they'd done it in the JL headquarters.

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gen717 October 27 2008, 05:29:39 UTC
It's the stupid writers. Sleeping with Tess was out of character. I could see Oliver having regrets for possibly hurting her in the past and maybe even wanting to make amends, but she is the villaness, and he knows this since she's Lex's protege and he even commented as such. I just wanted to smack him for being so incredibly stupid, and this is just another example of SVs failure to know their own characters.. (Just as Chlimmy is also all kinds of wrong, and real!Chloe would never agree to marry him)... gah. Makes me mad. LOL I don't dislike Oliver yet, but if they keep having him do stupid things like that, I just might start. Needless to say I thought the whole thing was a big WTF too.

Anyway, my Oliver and Chloe are smarter.. lol Thanks so much for reading I'm so glad you liked it!

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purple_moon123 October 28 2008, 03:57:18 UTC
I did love what some one said: why are hero's so stupid in their alter egos??? I just want Ollie to stop with the stupidity!!

It's just the writers that love to hit you over and over with couples. Drawing everything out with no end in sight. Look at what they did with Clana and what they are doing to Chimmy. Chimmy needed to end season 6. (Actually it never should of started.) I still don't understand why would Chloe would take his douchy ass back.

Yes, your Chlollie is smarter for they are together as they should be!!

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laurelnola December 16 2008, 16:28:56 UTC
Holy Freaking Moses. I'm speechless.

And I need a cold shower. *g*

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