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gekkoryu

The Unquiet Thought, Chapter 18

Aug 27, 2013 11:17

I could have posted this story in a way so there was over a week between this chapter and the end, but I didn't because I'm not that mean.
Come back tomorrow for the torrent of writing!

Warning: Thor (I feel like that's all I need to say at this point)

( Nonsense happens )

thor, tony, fanfiction, golem-verse

Comments 11

maulfan August 27 2013, 15:53:35 UTC

ODIN LET ME LOVE YOU LET ME LOVE YOU LET ME LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU AND ALSO TONY YOU ARE THE MAN AND STEVE AND LOKI BUT MOSTLY JUST ODIN I LOVE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!! *does crazy dances* *Gets down on knees and begs for updates*

somagordon August 27 2013, 16:13:26 UTC

Wow, shit just got real! Please Odin, fix this!

anonymous August 27 2013, 16:17:50 UTC

OMG!! One of the best cliffhangers ever. Can I just tell you that this is probably one of the only stories that the author has managed to make me totally love Odin. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

gekkoryu August 27 2013, 22:12:59 UTC

He's so easy to dislike too, what with basically being a coward in the comics and an asshole in mythology. I'm glad I was able to somewhat redeem him here.

nemi_chan August 27 2013, 18:25:23 UTC

I oh godafsh ( ... )

nemi_chan August 27 2013, 22:23:14 UTC

Speaking of unhealthy relationships... I also think it's worth considering exactly how cunning Frigga is that she was able to COMPLETELY turn Thor's mind around when he clearly knew what he had done to Loki. She saw he was emotionally vulnerable and bam.

nemi_chan August 28 2013, 01:22:56 UTC

No, Thor was still in denial when she got to him.

Maybe anon wasn't 100%, but it definitely wasn't denial at that moment. gekkoryu August 28 2013, 03:05:15 UTC

I think anon is referring to Thor's emotional breakdown after he realizes that Loki is The Golem (not actually Loki), flees to Asgard, and isolates himself while he has an anxiety attack. In the throes of said attack (emotionally vulnerable, check) he goes to his mother because Mother = Protector (even if Frigga is... not so much) and only after she is done with him goes back out into Asgard and talks to his friends.
Frigga has been subtly manipulating Thor and his relationship with Loki their entire lives. It is definitely within the realm of possibility that with this as a trigger she (for lack of a better word) brainwashed Thor into believing what she wanted him to. She refocused him on what has always worked in the past. Anger and arrogance.

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legion11 August 27 2013, 20:39:08 UTC

Evillest cliffhanger of all evil cliffhangers from hell.
Tomorrow? Please!