The Unquiet Thought, Chapter 2

[gekkoryu]

I'm trying get on some kind of posting schedule, at least every other week. I wanted to put that out there to keep myself accountable since I have the habit of getting distracted.

The feedback I'm getting is really appreciated and encouraging.  The next few months are going to be rough so I hope you'll all bear with me.

Comments

[maulfan]

*Wibbles* Asking-- and Steve trying to explain and flat out lying about Fury D: *Wibbles more* SO MANY FEELS D: D: D:

Looooooki ;;;;o;;;;

[anonymous]

I love how backward and wrong everyone feels about what was done to Loki but Thor seems completely oblivious to it all. I believe this is exactly what Thor would be like.

[nemi_chan]

Oh dear, I missed the last part, I just have to make this review extra long to make up for it

[gekkoryu]

New York and Florida are in the same time zone, but Malibu is in California.

And I'm glad you like Tony's voice, I worried about it a little at first.

[nemi_chan]

Why for do I keep on reading Malibu as Miami? I have no freaking idea? ugh=me.

Your Tony is the perfect blend of...of five year old hedonistic genius determinator.

[somagordon]

Just found this story on norsekink. Really different take on how Odin and Frigga act with Loki. This is the first fic I've read where Frigga isn't all Team Loki but Odin is. LOL.

I really want to know wtf Thor was thinking - just that he was going to make his brother better? Hope he realizes soon that he didn't do that at all. I also really like how creeped out and uncomfortable the rest of the Avengers are.

Hope to read more soon!

[nemi_chan]

Oh, there was some discussion on it back before in the other parts in the comments. Thor thinks Loki is a programed toy. That is, his personality was set and he's glitching now. He thinks Loki 'just' lost his memories.

To reused imagery: Loki was a velveteen Rabbit who became real. A real rabbit is a horrible toy, Thor just didn't realize Loki became real. How he runs away is the toy being broken, not a rabbit being real.

[anonymous]

This is nearly too depressing for me to read, but then, too fascinating not to read.

Thor is the biggest jerk.