The Unquiet Thought, Chapter 2
I'm trying get on some kind of posting schedule, at least every other week. I wanted to put that out there to keep myself accountable since I have the habit of getting distracted.
The feedback I'm getting is really appreciated and encouraging. The next few months are going to be rough so I hope you'll all bear with me.
( Chapter 2 )
The feedback I'm getting is really appreciated and encouraging. The next few months are going to be rough so I hope you'll all bear with me.
( Chapter 2 )
Hardly anything of substance...relates rather well with the bond between them, or how Thor has little enough to say to Loki, or rather about Loki and what he wants and likes and feels.
Of course, he's not Thor, he's not real, so it doesn't matter.
Nothing like Dummy, nothing like JARVIS. More human, more alive, more.
Maybe it's the eyes, how he emotes, how he so obviously feels. Loki is the pinnacle of wetware engineering.
Opening up Loki, he didn't make Loki, doesn't know Loki, and Loki's nothing like his bots. It's very close to the idea of dissecting a soul.
Tony, genius that he is, is stumbling towards the answer, which is so obvious it's hidden, and painful.
Loki knows light, darkness, how to open doors, even if he doesn't know what a door is, and does not know what awake means. And shows an interest in stimulation, even if he can't quite seek it out himself. He also cannot yet identify Sire by voice, or at least not when it's altered by coming through a door.
I'm starting to wonder if Loki changed like a human/Asgardian might, and no longer learns as easily as he did as a child. Or if the alteration fucked him up somewhat?
You have a great Tony Voice.
I bet Clint was watching Loki too, through the vents. I love how he's just, "'Sup." Total non care. Love it.
Perfect Thor walking into the kitchen Perfectly. Gives me vibes of how he defeated the Destroyer. (Which pissed me off, btw. Not a hair out of place after defeated a massive superweapon, bleh.) Makes you want to punch his face in.
Internet, Buying books, ooh I hope JARVIS helps, I hope Loki and JARVIS finally meet. Yes. And JARVIS answering Loki's questions and watching this new old new AI grow into full awareness and and and--
Steve saw Loki didn't eat. I doubt Thor did. Thor the blind. Yes, that is part of the problem, yes.
And Fury, confiscating Loki is a dumbass idea. Don't try it.
And Steve lying, he's so adorable.
EDIT: New York and Florida are in the same timezone.
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And I'm glad you like Tony's voice, I worried about it a little at first.
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Your Tony is the perfect blend of...of five year old hedonistic genius determinator.
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