Character Studies on Tim

[geeksicle_kezzy]

Him first, because he's the easiest. Perhaps. Sort of.

Him first, because he has a brilliant, twisted little mind that I get faster. There

Comments

[ladyoneill]

Wow! That was wonderful. Perfect Tim all brooding and constantly thinking, and perfect Kon all bantery. And loved the little shout outs to Rose.

[geeksicle_kezzy]

Thank you so much! I love Tim's warped non-stop mind. And God, Rose needs volumes, doesn't she?

[vespa331]

Mmm, this gets better everytime I reread it. The imagery and details, the dead-on voices of the boys, and Gotham swallowing Tim... oh my beautiful broken Timmy.

[geeksicle_kezzy]

Oh, that is . . . so good to hear. Great to know I had the boys and the imagery came across. Thanks for your excellent feedbacky.

(I love Tim broken)

[rubynye]

The laugh will echo its way into Tim’s consciousness tomorrow at school and he will shiver against years of training.

That line took my breath away. This was a really remarkable vignette.

[geeksicle_kezzy]

Thank you for the awesome feedback! Breath stealing is always a great thing to hear.

[geeksicle_kezzy]

God, I love the icon. Completely appropriate--fear the forehead angst.

And it has been hard for him. Poor Timlicious.

Thanks so much.

[neneboomerwing]

As you know, I adore this. I adore Tim and Gotham and Kon. and Kon. I love Tim's brain and the dream. The hint at him dreaming about Rose. So good. I adore you.

“Is there a machine for Bart, too? For Gar and Raven? Cass? Hey, Tim, I hate to burst your bubble, but you can’t help everyone.”

Such a perfect line.

Guh.

[geeksicle_kezzy]

Much love, thank you. Tim's brain is a weird, strange place and his friends are even stranger.

*smooch* thanks, darling.