Comments | geeksicle_kezzy: Character Studies on Tim

geeksicle_kezzy

Character Studies on Tim

Jan 16, 2007 20:15

Him first, because he's the easiest. Perhaps. Sort of.

Him first, because he has a brilliant, twisted little mind that I get faster. There ( Read more... )

genre: slash, rating: pg-13, pairing: tim/kon, dcu, char: tim, fic, char: kon

Comments 17

daybreak25 January 17 2007, 22:45:26 UTC

Oh, wow. Oh wowy wowy wow!

You, my friend, have just created the Tim I have longed to write. Because as much as I hate to admit it, I can not write Tim like that. It's easy to write Tim brooding, but it's hard to write Tim brooding correctly. :)

Loved it. A lot. Just awesomely awesome work!

geeksicle_kezzy January 18 2007, 02:46:45 UTC

Hee, thank you for the awesome feedbackness. Seriously, I preen and feel much better. I love Tim's psychotic brood, too.

theoret January 19 2007, 16:49:41 UTC

Oh Tim, Honey, no. *hugs him*
He's trying so hard to shut it out, but your subconscious is not really something you can escape. And given how scary and freaky and Timmish his conscious mind is, it's not really surprising that his subconscious would be all kinds of sneaky and evil too. But really, to have Kon show up in his dreams, and then shove all of his failures and fears and losses in his face, while maintaining a perfect Kon-voice. I can't think of much his subconscious could add to make this worse for him. Kon making friendly banter about how he's dead, and about how one day even Batman, despite all his training, despite how he's one of the few people left Tim should be able to rely on, will die, and there will be nothing Tim can do, and this looming future Tim has as Batman that he's always tried to avoid, but which seems to keep creeping closer and closer all the time, and all the other friends Tim will one day (fail) not be able to help and ow. Kon telling him all the things he doesn't want to hear and showing him all the ( ... )

geeksicle_kezzy January 19 2007, 20:21:27 UTC

Oh. I'm totally broken in return by your excellent feedback and yesyesyesyesyes, I love OYL Tim. I suppose lots of fangirls are uber-anti-OYL, but to me it adds a necessary depth and just . . . yes. I hate how much he's hurting from everything, but it's giving us so much of who Tim essentially is.

And yes, his subconscious would be just that viciously exact at him and God, I adore you because you so completely get it.

Thank you for the squee-worthy feedback. <3

katarik January 21 2007, 17:55:05 UTC

Oh, TIM. Honey. My poor baby boy. I really like how Tim reacts to Kon, and Kon's laughing affection and his *friendship* wrt Tim, and oh. My BOYS.

Can't save everyone, Tim, and you flatly refuse to believe that where it matters.

geeksicle_kezzy January 21 2007, 20:23:00 UTC

He's so stubborn it's painful. God, the ache of it. I hope he never loses the way he hopes for things, even if it tends to kick his ass mentally.

Thanks lots for your feedback.

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geeksicle_kezzy January 23 2007, 07:42:53 UTC

Heee, thank you lots. And Tim's subconscious is a vicious one.

I love YJ!Kon and Johns' growing pains twist on him, so I'm insanely flattered and pleased that's how he appeared here.

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geeksicle_kezzy January 23 2007, 07:48:15 UTC

Hahahaha, LJ is Evil and thwarty.

Thank you so much and I have a few more things coming up that are sitting on my hard drive waiting for me to decide they're ready. *coughs*

Tim breaks my heart so hard, so I'm uber-pleased (in a band-aid giving way) that I can keep that part of him in fic.