Drabble: 'South Wind'

Mar 09, 2006 22:12

Some more James/Elizabeth for the drabble challenge of two weeks ago...

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potcfic, james-elizabeth, challenge, jack

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hereswith March 12 2006, 15:10:16 UTC
Sorry for the late review! Oh, you wrote it, I'm so happy! The voices are perfect, I loved the South Wind comparison, James being slightly jealous, and the fact that Elizabeth "acquiesced to the extent of staying a step behind", as well as the reference to what Jack said to her in True Heart. And the guessing game is great too, very funny!

Altogether wonderful, and it made me smile :-)

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geekmama March 13 2006, 00:38:11 UTC
Thank you, my dear! It's so gratifying when a reader likes all one's favorite bits. I'm glad you finally saw it, and that it made you smile.

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sleepy_lotus July 12 2016, 22:30:24 UTC
"The Commodore looked skeptical. “What does it stand for then? Various odd curiosities?”

Lmao!! You are so funny! Sweet Drabble!

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geekmama July 12 2016, 23:12:10 UTC
Thank you! Those piratey folk are the funniest, such great characters!

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geekmama July 13 2016, 22:13:58 UTC
Thank you! Those piratey folk are the funniest, such great characters!

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