Drabble: 'Disgust in the Afternoon' (J/E - PG13)

[geekmama]

A sequel to Encomium, this one is 130 unbetaed (but hopefully acceptable) words for the current drabble challenge prompt, 'Disgust'. pearlseed, I promise I'm working on your Jack/Harry birthday fic! And florencia7, thank you so much for the virtual picnic basket! Tall ship fans, check out this display of beautiful sterns at Dark Roasted Blend (with references to PotC

Comments

[pearlseed]

Hot damn! I mean really, HOT damn!

He'd known what would come to him on surrendering...More like a heady mix of revenge and (God help him) blessing...of course, he's well and truly caught...Like some callow and helplessly priapic boy.

I don't even know what went on with them, but wowiezowiebatman! Hot!

"But then she knew him as well." She was learning Fast, weren't she?

"He strips again," Let's see, I like this line becos it's telling me lots about lots and that he would get dressed to escape and then blow it. Said already, hot damn!

[geekmama]

You are so quick! And I'm so glad you enjoyed both the angst and the hotness. It's a fine combination. *g*

Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting!!

[just_a_dram]

Pearlseed already quoted my favorite bit, but I just need to say that callow and helplessly priapic boy is just fantastic.

Great follow up! Yet again, you manage to express so much in so few words.

[geekmama]

Thank you, and forgive the lateness of my reply. I'm so happy you liked it!

[whensheflies]

Nnnnnnngh! I love this so much! You've captured Jack's conflicted emotions perfectly.

[geekmama]

Thank you!

[lilouche007]

nice !

[geekmama]

Thank you!

[phoenix_9664]

Ooooh, just yummy. So intimate and suggestive. I love when she lifts her arms . . . .

[geekmama]

They are just so right together. Thank you very much for letting me know you enjoyed it!