Losing Paradise - Milton Ch 2

[garnigal]

LJ Idol Wk 2

Milton couldn’t shake the feeling that someone was watching him. He’d felt it ever since he arrived at the station. He’d taken the train to New Orleans and wheedled his way into first class despite his father only paying for coach. He chose a section of mostly women traveling with female companions - husbands, brothers, and fathers had

Comments

[enigmaticblues]

This is just getting more and more interesting! I'm really enjoying it!

[adoptedwriter]

Oh wow! Looking forward to the next chapter!

[engarian]

This is going to be a fun ride.

- Erulisse (one L)

[beautyofgrey]

Oh wow - such a dark journey you are taking us on, but so well-written!

[drippedonpaper]

Sounds like a deal with the devil? Reminds me a bit of a current book that I LOVE "The Unseen Life of Addie La Rue"

You created a "bad boy" character that I love to hate, but then, if he was bad to help his son..wow, that makes it slightly harder to hate him.

I don't know. I like to think I'd never make a deal with the devil, but my kids ARE my weakness. If I had to do it to make them safe...I still hope I wouldn't.

Will this story continue?