[fic] In Amnion, 6/? (Torchwood; Jack/Ianto, post-COE, MA)

[garnettrees]

AUTHOR'S NOTES: I'm so glad you guys weren't turned off by the last chapter! I really appreciate the feedback-- every comment makes me do a little chair dance, I swear. ^__^ So, here's Chapter 6 with the promised ritual. I hope it doesn't disappoint! Not much else to say, save that I always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. And I

Comments

[cen_evans]

Lol, thanks for the whole Daleks doing the conga mental image. Did not need that picture in my mind at this hour of the day. *shudders* That thought seriously brought tears to my eyes.

Another beautiful chapter. I especially loved Wei's line 'Ask, ask, ask. You'll never get any answers, only make them up so you'll feel better." BRILLIANT!

Can't wait for the next bit!

[garnettrees]

Daleks are terrifying, no matter what they're doing. Eating cake, going shopping, dancing... the horrors. ^_~

Thank you so much for commenting on this chapter! I'm glad you liked Wei's point-- I was afraid it would seem like the Box came out of nowhere, but that tends to happen with a lot of Torchwood artefacts. And, as she said, she's not going to tell Jack all her secrets. ^__^
-Meredith

[blipxinxtime]

You have no idea how big of a smile I got from the utter joy of seeing that there was a new chapter. An amazing one, at that. I'm so excited now, more so than I was before. SO CLOSE! YET SO FAR AWAY!

[garnettrees]

*grins* Aww... I'm glad I could make you smile! And I promise to deliver on the Ianto in the next chapter. I actually intended it to happen sooner, but this story has a mind of its own!
-Meredith

[doves_wing]

*sigh* More brilliance. Oh Ianto is *so* not going to be pleased that Jack did this.

... you said something about Ianto drinking from Jack. Oh dear. That doesn't bode well.

[garnettrees]

And we all know Ianto is a terror when he's pissy. *sigh* I just hope I can do justice to his character.

... you said something about Ianto drinking from Jack. Oh dear.
Yeah, I did say that. I came from the Buffy fandom! It's not my fault I have a vampire fetish! ^^;; Seriously, I hope that-- when we get to that section-- it makes sense and stays in character. I'll try my very best!
-Meredith

[doves_wing]

Ah, I see. Don't blame you. ^_- I'm sure you will do just fine.

... Spike/Buffy or Angel/Buffy? XD

[garnettrees]

Ah, I see. Don't blame you. ^_-
*grins* Now those boys were vampires. I just about died of excitement when James Marsters was on Torchwood!

... Spike/Buffy or Angel/Buffy? XD
I'm afraid I've always been a slasher. But I do have a sneeking soft spot for Angel/Buffy. Spike is, hands down, my favorite character. ^__^
-Meredith

[tonjavmoore]

The atmosphere in these chapters cills me to the bone even as my heart speeds up in anticipation. I hope you post soon as this is something I very much look forward to.

Thanks!

[garnettrees]

No, thank you! It's so good to know people are enjoying the in-between chapters. I was worried.

I'm so glad you commented!
-Meredith

[stuffphile]

I'm really greedy for this story. My eyes gobble every word like a glutton and then look around for more. Every bit is delicious. The action right now, is mesmerizing, I'm riveted by all these sensual details that seem beautiful so far, but I know from the hints that they have terrible significance yet to be revealed. Makes for a really thrilling read.

[garnettrees]

I really appreciate getting comments from you-- it's good to know the atmosphere I want is coming across, and that the threads I'm leaving to pick up later are noticable. I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well!
-Meredith