[Fic] The Wrong Move - Ch21

Dec 16, 2010 01:26

Chapter 21

January, 2008

Pi: *eyes widen in shock* Toma?

Toma: Good morning *smiles*

Pi: *confused* am I dreaming?

Toma: What do you think? *giggles*

Pi: I am dreaming! Ugh *holding his head because of incredible pain* or maybe I’m starting to become delusional?

Toma: *laughs loudly* Go wash your face and come eat breakfast! There is ( Read more... )

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paoktsou December 15 2010, 21:37:03 UTC
omg!! kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!! omg!! akame is love, well tomapi too!! but AKAME IS LOVE!!
i want them together again!! girl you just kille me at the end!!
please continue!! it's more than awesome!! love love love it!!
chuu!!

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 21:51:50 UTC
You're FIRST and FAST! LOL!! *gives u choco and cupcakes*

Hehehehehehehe
I'm glad you loved it!
Well, I'm a tease so I love to make my endings cliffhanger
I will continue dear...don't worry ^___^
Thanks alot for reading and commenting sweetie *hugs*

Chuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu~~

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hinatah December 15 2010, 22:07:22 UTC
Yay for TomaPi!
But the AKame part was better. I really liked the fact that Kame acted based solely upon his heart's choice. Seems like, for once, Jin made the right move in this part. XD

Love it!
*hugs*

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 23:26:40 UTC
I'm glad you loved it all, but I also prefer the akame part ~
yes, I actually think Jin did ^__^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear *hugs back*

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nikkimattei December 15 2010, 22:18:55 UTC
WOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Yes!!! Toma and Yamapi are together, so kawaii!!!

And AKAME is so close...waiting for next chapter <3

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 23:28:02 UTC
Yes, they finally are~
and akame are love ne~~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting sweetie ^__^

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agustin1982 December 15 2010, 22:36:39 UTC
I hope akame will be together again xD Uwaaa kame hug Jin xD Update soon ne *HUGS*

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 23:29:41 UTC
You'll see soon if they are back or not! Hehehehe~
yes, Kame actually hugged Jin.....they're just love ne~~
I will do my best to update soon
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting dear *hugs back*

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garnet_light December 15 2010, 23:32:02 UTC
I'm glad you did ne~
You'll see in the next chapter dear ^_^
yes it sure was, but I bet the ending made u forget all about the heartbreaking scene
TomaPi are love as well as Akame
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting hon *hugs*

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