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game_byrd

Don't Fight The Future

Dec 09, 2011 01:39

Title: Don’t Fight The Future
Characters: Gabriel/Peter Petrelli
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Graphic sexual content
Word count: ~800
Setting: Shattered Salvation (not that it’s important - any generic future with Gabe and Peter together will work)
Summary: Gabriel has a precognitive dream and sets about making it come true.
Notes: I wrote this a year and a ( Read more... )

gabriel, shattered salvation, advent calendar, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17

Comments 17

lornrocks December 9 2011, 09:45:22 UTC

Awww, this is the sweetest thing ever.

game_byrd December 9 2011, 12:35:13 UTC

:) Thank you.

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game_byrd December 9 2011, 12:35:01 UTC

Thanks!

mafalda_yu December 9 2011, 14:36:54 UTC

Oh, the sweetness .. I'm making an overdose of sugar in these days, but it is never enough!!! Thanks for this

game_byrd December 9 2011, 17:47:18 UTC

You're very welcome! It's the holidays. Overindulgence is the go-to!

punk4life1315 December 9 2011, 18:40:21 UTC

Very, very sweet and intimate. Great fic. :)

game_byrd December 9 2011, 18:44:47 UTC

Thanks!

I just thought that for once, precognition ought to show you something good, instead of all the doom and gloom.

I wrote this like a year and a half ago. I'm embarrassed to say it shows. Ha.

means2bhuman December 10 2011, 05:33:59 UTC

Aww. Lovely.

I had a flashback to 'So what'd we win?' (S4, you might not have seen the episode), just with more genuine enthusiasm and less...sarcasm.

And I laughed about it being scripted. Peter's going 'Gosh, that's sure...detailed. Thought about this all night, have you?'

Don't think I didn't notice you sneaking in the word earth-shattering with Petlar sex in the same sentence. I'm onto you.

I enjoy the realism - Peter cuts himself and has to go out and get the tray. And also that Gabriel didn't immediately go for the 'passing-food-through-a-kiss' thing, that he had to stumble on it.

That whole last paragraph was yum on a stick.

And Peter having cute, love moments of drama FTW.

(I couldn't tell you'd written this a year plus ago, so you know)

game_byrd December 10 2011, 14:24:47 UTC

Thank you!

In context, it was written while I had an idea for SS that in the near future, Peter would tend to be the one leading/dominant and Gabriel was usually compliant and cautious. So for him to come out with a 'here's *exactly* what we're going to do this evening' was unusual. It would have normally been more like 'would you be okay with doing X, Peter?' and even that would have been awfully forward of Gabe.

SS has since spiraled off and out into a different direction, mostly at the insistence of one of my reviewers who insisted the guys really ought to talk about what they wanted in the relationship and in bed. Having them do that set them on a different course of increasing communication rather than stumbling around trying to figure out what they each wanted. The stumbling around is more my personal experience of sex in a relationship, as actually discussing what you want, using words is just so strange and off limits. Ha.

means2bhuman December 10 2011, 22:21:58 UTC

And the best part is I subconsciously understood that from the bluntness of Peter's blinking reaction. He was very surprised to hear that ( ... )

game_byrd December 10 2011, 23:06:57 UTC

If you're interested, I have a couple chapters of SS that got scrapped entirely after the direction change because they turned into things the boys just wouldn't do with each other. They don't make a lot of sense out of context so I've never tried to recycle them. If you want to read them, let me know and I'll email them over ( ... )

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