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Double Duty

Nov 19, 2011 14:49

Title: Double Duty
Characters: Gabriel (starring as Gabe and Sylar) / Peter Petrelli
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Mild food sex, explicit sexual content
Word count: ~4,600
Setting: Shattered Salvation, well beyond where I’ve published to date. All you really need to know though is that Gabriel and Peter are married and in the context of a long-term ( Read more... )

shattered salvation, doubling up, !fandom: heroes, peter, rated nc-17, sylar, gabriel, sylar/gabriel/peter

Comments 15

vivihanna November 19 2011, 21:55:02 UTC

Oh wow. There are no words to describe how amazing this was! Thank you so much! You got down their separate personalities perfectly! I loved how Gabriel was worried about making a mess even though he not only had Peter completely naked in front of him, but it was a chocolate covered Peter, lol! Peter cleaning off Gabriel's face was really cute, I could see him totally doing that. This was incredibly hot, I loved it! I'm not going to be able to fully concentrate for the rest of the week year now, hehe! :D

Again, thank you times infinity! And I hope to have your gift finished before Thanksgiving. :D

game_byrd November 19 2011, 22:15:13 UTC

Chocolate-covered naked Peter! Mmmm! The best kind!

Glad you liked it!

dancingdragon3 November 20 2011, 06:06:29 UTC

Super hot! And a very cool use of Eli's power.

And that you were working out some deep seated psychological stuff with Gabriel in the middle of all that was something. Very deftly done.

But I didn't get that Gabriel had had sex with himself before. Is that some part of SS?

BTW, I would love to see where they do it again with Peter in the middle!

game_byrd November 20 2011, 06:18:58 UTC

Where he'd done it before: http://game-byrd.livejournal.com/125372.html

One of those kinkmeme prompts I wrote, but for some reason never cross-posted it on my actual journal. So I posted it today. It was a stand-alone where Sylar fucked James Martin-shape-shifted-as-Sylar before killing him for his ability. Later I decided to use that as the beginning of a series where Sylar got carried away using shape-shifting, a descent into madness as we saw in canon, except my version was going to have a lot more perverted sex and mind-fuckery, with Sylar being not-at-all a good person. But I never wrote it, still haven't.

I'll see if my muse gets a hankering for the sequel with Peter-in-the-middle. I have to say, Peter's mind went into the gutter really firmly right away, despite his genuine concern for what all this meant for and about Gabriel's mental state. Poor Peter - he's afraid that encouraging this might be bad for his partner's mental health, but it's hot as hell. :)

dancingdragon3 November 20 2011, 06:35:50 UTC

Okay, Ive read that. It was naughty and amazingly hot. So bad! And I also remember you saying you wanted to write a story about Sylar and his shape shifting adventure. I think you should. As long as it will be very very bad, in a good way ;-)

means2bhuman November 20 2011, 09:13:35 UTC

Dude ( ... )

game_byrd November 20 2011, 14:23:54 UTC

Sylar-on-Sylar was over on FFN. I spent a long time looking for it in my LJ. As I recall, I was feeling a bit self-conscious about a few of those kinkmeme things I wrote. I don't think I ever ... um, yeah, there's one that was worse that I never posted to my LJ either. Still don't want to. Too ... yeah. "too ( ... )

means2bhuman November 20 2011, 09:14:17 UTC

Sylar groaned slightly and leaned forward to press his body against Peter’s in a slow grind. Gabe caught a shadow of the feeling of that motion, because there was no way he could ignore what his duplicate was doing. There would be no cutting himself off from this and pretending it wasn’t happening. He’d feel whatever they did as a phantom sensation. His penis felt itchy and uncomfortable in his slacks as it tried to rise in sympathy with the hardness he knew was growing in Sylar’s jeans. Jealousy and possessiveness and worthlessness shot through him. He wanted to peel Sylar off of Peter and pummel him into the wall. -- Very clever. A lot being said in there that you're just scratching the surface of. And good editing, with my stupid beta-angel on your shoulder whispering 'elaborate, how does that make him feel ( ... )

game_byrd November 20 2011, 14:44:25 UTC

Your beta-angel is not stupid! Very smart, it is, and I appreciate everything you've done to help me get better ( ... )

means2bhuman November 20 2011, 09:15:16 UTC

“Learning to love myself, apparently,” Sylar quipped. “Now hold still.” -- Ha ha. What an...interesting way to say it, mean it, and 'do' it! Somehow, I don't think that's what therapists envision when they say that ( ... )

game_byrd November 20 2011, 14:48:38 UTC

I know, or at least I think, that a number of my LJ readers haven't read Shattered Salvation, so I'm glad that someone here gets what was going on with the skeletons in the closet. I was worried that would just be extra weirdness that came out of left field and then went back into left field - unnecessary story elements.

And I'm glad you didn't find it too distracting!