Double Duty

[game_byrd]

Title: Double Duty
Characters: Gabriel (starring as Gabe and Sylar) / Peter Petrelli
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Mild food sex, explicit sexual content
Word count: ~4,600
Setting: Shattered Salvation, well beyond where I’ve published to date. All you really need to know though is that Gabriel and Peter are married and in the context of a long-term

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[means2bhuman]

Dude!
Let me get myself straight here.
First of all, I'd just re-read Sylar on Sylar, like...yesterday? Very recently and was going to bug you or mention why you hadn't posted that hotness over here. I look up and here it is. (You freakin' mind reader, you).

This reminded me, fondly, of a certain you-know-who's writing in style and mysophobia. I have to say, I enjoyed the reminiscing but this was...hot. And, honestly, what made it hotter was that you wrote it (its better that way IMO). You paid homage...and moved on and made it your own because it clearly is your own and that's intended as a compliment.

Overall I felt that the mysophobia wasn't entirely...SS (maybe you haven't gotten to that point yet?) but I think when faced with/compared to/in the room with Sylar, I think Gabe's (Virginia) tendency comes out. Plus that's the way those two...characters/personalities interact anyway. So maybe its something new/never explored/repressed urge/fitting the setting to the prompt, but the mysophobia works.

I'm not a food fetish person - food has its uses, sometimes in the bedroom, but its not a kink for me. That being said...these two (three) men covered in chocolate, well... It wasn't overdone (overapplied!) or used as a crutch so props to you for that. That's what made it hot as opposed to 'let's all roll in chocolate'.

I literally laid back and laughed at several points during this, holy smokes! "Acting overly casual, Sylar used his thumb to flip open the squeeze bottle and poured a shot of courage directly in his mouth - fuck the milk. “You are so gross,” Gabe complained." (Chocolate as 'liquid courage'?! A man after my own heart! Seriously, Chocolate is my reward. And the 'you are SOOOO gross' was just...icing). I wish I could recall the other spots, but I can't, so just know that I did make some noise laughing at this piece (in appropriate places, too). Oh, here's one: "Do I really look like that when I glare at people? That’s really rude." And here "Gabe also displayed his love of hair gel," (I hadn't noticed that! Every season except S4 has involved hair gel. I blame Nathan, honestly).

His nerves felt like a bag of nails, sharp ends poking him at every turn. -- I love that description because that's what mine feel like sometimes. I finally have a saying for it now! Ha.

Peter came to the entry to the kitchen and arrested, eyes flicking between the two of them./“So … uh …” Peter started, paused and then resumed with the obvious question, “how’s Eli?” -- Loved that image of the pause/resume there. So Peter. 'Oh...wasn't expecting that, regroup, m'kay, phrase this nicely and normally so party freaks out, "So...how's...things?"' He's probably thinking though: 'oh, FML, could my marriage(s) get any weirder?!'

Can I, like, keep that image of Sylar's chest hair?

Sylar looked taller, because he naturally stood straighter. Gabe was slouching uneasily next to the counter. -- as always the little details that make me think and agree.

“He is,” they both answered in unison, each indicating the other. Peter’s face screwed up in confusion. “How is it that neither one of you is lying?” he asked, mostly of himself. -- Ha! Again, poor Peter going 'hoo, boy...'

Sylar smirked. “You don’t want anything my mouth has been on, do you? Well, that’s good for me.” -- Strange, now I think about it, how in SS, Gabriel isn't...how do I say, he doesn't know Sylar like the back of his hand. He knows that Sylar *can* screw up everyone's lives, he knows what Sylar will *do* to accomplish that, he knows sometimes/most of the time? *why* Sylar would do those things...but sometimes he doesn't. Gabriel left himself wide, wide open to that one. Sylar: 'well, now that I have your permission...' My mind went to Sylar going around the house licking everything he wanted which could take a while! (Maybe Gabriel coming behind with the windex or clorox).

Woe is Peter, having to sit there and be, well, the treat. I enjoyed him sitting there, in semi-awkward arousal, stuck in the doorway while Sylar smears him with ice-cream topping and licks it off (those cute lips).

[game_byrd]

Sylar-on-Sylar was over on FFN. I spent a long time looking for it in my LJ. As I recall, I was feeling a bit self-conscious about a few of those kinkmeme things I wrote. I don't think I ever ... um, yeah, there's one that was worse that I never posted to my LJ either. Still don't want to. Too ... yeah. "too"

So, moving right along! Given the you-know-who, I've read that person really likes doppelganger-sex, so hopefully they'll enjoy this. And if they're reading this, then thank you so much Mac and Lana, for showing me the way!

Mysophobia - You'll note, I hope, that Peter has none and neither does Sylar. It's only Gabe, here. Gabriel in SS can't stand cum in his mouth, won't kiss Peter after a blow job, doesn't like the idea of anyone rimming him ... but it's not a general thing. He also adores the way Peter smells after sex with him (well, before sex too, but after is particularly yummy). Food's never come up before. I'm not big into food fetish either and in my mind, neither are either of the guys. Peter's perfectly fine with whatever as long as everyone is enjoying and it's reasonably safe, but he's not getting off on the food specifically. Gabriel - it bothers him, it's going to need clean up, it's irresponsible, it's perverted and slovenly. Sylar - hey, whatever turns up the heat turns up the fucking heat. But it doesn't do much of anything for him by itself. Gabe - OMG No! ... unless it's really hot, then we flip the switch from taboo to serious turn-on.

Bag of nails - :D I made that one up. So yay, it works! Usually I'm getting my clever phrases from someone else - some other author, or something I overheard, etc.

Sylar licking everything - LOL! What an image! He would, wouldn't he? Just like kids at the lunch table licking everything on their plate so that no other kid would steal their food while they weren't looking. Ew!

As for Peter, this was written mainly from Gabe's POV so Peter's motivations are pretty opaque. Just for you, I'll go back through and detail them in a separate reply!