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Alexandria

Nov 12, 2006 15:00

Title: Alexandria
Author: Gaia (gaiaanarchy)
Rating: R
Pairings: Sheppard/M, McKay/Sheppard
Beta: ellex42
Spoilers: Spoilers: Epiphany, the Misbegotten, Common Ground

Summary: Much has changed since John came to them through the portal, though he won't say where he came from or why.

( ALEXANDRIA )

futurefic, mcshep, sheppard/m, fic

Comments 23

zing_och November 12 2006, 21:56:13 UTC

Wow. This is awesome. It took me ages to figure out what was happening... now I'll have to reread with that in mind. It's like having two stories in one! :)

I really liked your writing; Susuro's POV gave the story a very interesting atmosphere, so far removed from what I usually see in SGA fic.

cad27 November 13 2006, 00:24:07 UTC

You controlled the exposition in this fantastically well. I kept tossing up all these scenarios and it just came together so well. Beautifully done.

grey_bard November 13 2006, 02:32:41 UTC

Wow. And ouch. Oh, my.

dossier November 13 2006, 04:15:46 UTC

oh, what an excellent, weird and thinky story this is. I believe that it will require re-reading to really soak up the spinetinglingwrongness of Susuro/Sheppard, but man, I love your brain!

OMFG krysalys November 13 2006, 04:43:03 UTC

That was incredible.
Absolutely frelling awesome.
You left us hanging for so long, and drew it out deliciously, and... and...
I would love to read this from Rodney's, or Ronon's, POV.
Because, if they were gonna destroy Sanctuary, then all Rodney had to do was take out the ZedPM. Right?
Hrm, maybe the recently Ascended would've stopped him?
But then blowing the place up would've done the same thing as taking out the ZedPM. *scratches head* Hmmmm... a predicament there. When to interfere in the ways of mortals, and when not to?
And the whole thing where John and Susoro are fucking?
*shudders*
Why would John do that?! Is that a way of punishing himself?
Just... ew. *shudders more*
And I'm left with one burning question here - who was left to write those prophesies out regarding the last group that'd Ascended? Who else'd know other than the Atlanteans?
Oh man, I so crave backstory and further expansion on this.
But it's still perfectly and heartachingly beautiful left just like this, too.
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