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gaedhal

"Coup de Foudre" 130

Jun 03, 2016 00:34

Clearing the air… and laying down the law.

By Gaedhal

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coup de foudre, debbie, michael, fanfiction, qaf, gus

Comments 19

wren_kt7oz June 3 2016, 11:06:17 UTC

Welcome to reality, kid.

It's time and more than time that Gus had this reality check.

Will be interesting to see how he deals.

This, I guess, is when he starts finding out who he is, and who he wants to be.

Nice one, Gael.

gaedhal June 4 2016, 22:29:17 UTC

Yes, it was about time Gus had to listen and not just mouth off!

chadmom June 3 2016, 16:41:46 UTC

I think Brian will forgive Justin. He's ready to forgive Gus, based on his dream.

Hopefully this will be a big slap into reality for bratty Gus.

Nice chap, Gael.

gaedhal June 4 2016, 22:30:19 UTC

Brian is still suffering from the bashing, perhaps even
more than Justin because he's never had to face it and
Justin has.

That said, they both need some therapy for PTSD!

sfscarlet June 3 2016, 19:37:07 UTC

Didn't see that coming ( the talk to Gus) but glad it did. About time he realized his dad loves Justin and Justin isn't going away.

gaedhal June 4 2016, 22:31:02 UTC

Brian does love him -- and he loves Gus.

har2 June 3 2016, 23:26:07 UTC

I really liked this chapter. It is about time that Michael and Debbie told Gus the truth about Justin, St. James and the reason Gus is getting the opportunity to go to school there. Hopefully he will get his act together and make amends with Justin.

gaedhal June 4 2016, 22:31:42 UTC

As much as Michael bitches about things, like Justin, he's
on their side.

And Gus annoys the heck out of him!

ljtilford June 3 2016, 23:39:39 UTC

Great chapter and great pictures. We knew Debbie had the ability to give Gus a much needed dose of reality, but MIchael showed a surprising growth of backbone. It was about time because Michael helped paint Justin as the evil ex when he began to wonder about the past. Lindz also could have done a more balanced narrative. The gang left Justin in a deep hole from which to form a positive relationship with Gus. Gus's open hostility must have hurt Justin deaply.ljtilford

gaedhal June 4 2016, 22:33:48 UTC

I don't think they realized the depth of Gus's fear -- and the kid
is terrified. First he lost Ron and then almost his father. He sees
Justin as a scapegoat, but I think he's realizing how wrong he's
been.