"Coup de Foudre" 47

Jan 18, 2014 18:37

A ride to trouble.

By Gaedhal


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coup de foudre, fanfiction, brian/justin, qaf

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anno53 January 19 2014, 15:43:45 UTC
Justin needs to dump Robbie.

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rgrandixie January 19 2014, 18:35:27 UTC
Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store for us (and the boys)!

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anonymous January 19 2014, 18:36:55 UTC
What game is Brian playing and does he even understand what game it is? As for Justin, well he should make some decisions about his life?

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gaedhal January 19 2014, 22:35:10 UTC
He's playing the game.

But as to the consequences…

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nm131 January 19 2014, 18:59:54 UTC
Justin is about the same age as Brian was when they broke up and he left for NY ( ... )

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gaedhal January 19 2014, 22:41:42 UTC
Justin has always loved the allure of the forbidden -- down and dirty
sex with Brian has always been a lot of the appeal. Think about Justin
wanting to do it raw, or the "danger" sex scene.

Brian is also about power. Remember the idea that Brian always treated
Michael gently because he couldn't handle things otherwise, while he
treated Justin more roughly because he thought he could take it -- or
because Justin needed that to man up. It's the same with Garrett. Brian
isn't playing games with Garrett because Garrett is more fragile, but he's
also an adult who understands this isn't a romance -- at least he understands
that rationally. Garrett's emotional understanding may be very different.

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nm131 January 19 2014, 23:42:47 UTC
You're right, of course, about Brian and power. He does treat people according to their ability to adapt.

I have no doubt that Garrett will be emotionally hurt even though intellectually he "knows the score". Robbie, I can see being angry, confused and hurt. I'm not sure that everyone, not just the four men directly involved, will react like Brian anticipates - even himself. Brian has the power to reset the situation but the control may be slipping from his grasp.

Good chapter - you have me guessing at where there is leading.

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anonymous January 21 2014, 01:08:15 UTC
What is Brian Playing at? He takes Justin away for sex and then heaps vebal abuse on him. Is this some sort of plan, or does Brian just like sex with Justin, only to regret it after?

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gaedhal January 21 2014, 04:24:11 UTC
Good question...

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