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gaedhal

253 Creekside Canyon II -- Part 4

Nov 11, 2006 03:27

A few hard truths.

( Part 4 )

ron, brian, fanfiction, qaf, creekside canyon, kinnetik

Comments 20

arwensong November 11 2006, 03:57:12 UTC

Hooray for Hollywood! Way to go, Ron! I am so relieved that Brian went after Ron. Your writing was so intense, I felt like I was right there with them; brilliant! There was just the right amount of description, without it feeling like you put things in just for the sake of doing it, if you know what I mean. Every word had impact. Thank you for such a wonderful chapter

gaedhal November 11 2006, 05:23:45 UTC

Ron is the total opposite of "Never go after anyone" --

rgrandixie November 11 2006, 04:49:55 UTC

I'm going to be really articulate and say.....YAY!!!!

gaedhal November 11 2006, 05:24:15 UTC

Okay!

Gael sarahj2222 November 11 2006, 04:57:28 UTC

Yeah. Me too..I just got unboard, and I love it..

Re: Gael gaedhal November 11 2006, 05:22:55 UTC

Well, where the heck have you been? LOL!

Re: Gael sarahj2222 November 11 2006, 05:36:02 UTC

Where have I been? Where have you been? I have an LJ, try sarahj2222..LOL Sarah

Re: Gael gaedhal November 11 2006, 06:19:12 UTC

I know -- you're on my Flist!

grneyedwoman November 11 2006, 06:22:23 UTC

Go Ron!!!!

chadmom November 11 2006, 15:21:29 UTC

Wonderful chapter!