"253 Creekside Canyon" 25

Jun 23, 2006 01:46

Watching the past.

Part 25 )

ron, brian, fic, qaf, creekside canyon

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akasha_lilian June 23 2006, 07:43:21 UTC
"Yes," Brian affirmed. "I can't leave here without watching it. But you already knew that, didn't you, Ron?"

Ron isn't in the least manipulative, right!? ;-P

This was a really hot and awesome chapter. Brian watching his younger self making love feels so raw and touching somehow. Wow again, I never get enough of your writing!

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qafhappy June 23 2006, 13:37:20 UTC
Hot post, Gael! RL has been keeping me too busy to read LJ much, and I've fallen dismally far behind on this fic - but loved this chapter!

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hot stuff! kaiponohea June 23 2006, 13:53:35 UTC
Hey. Just wanted to check in and say I've been following this but haven't commented much. Love the way you write! This story allows quite a different window into Brian's mind, which is fascinating. I just wish I could find a way to like Ron.... I keep trying, which means I keep reading....

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rgrandixie June 23 2006, 15:15:18 UTC
Beautiful chapter, very hot. Can't wait to see where they go from here.

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damietta June 23 2006, 19:23:07 UTC
While it was manipulative of Ron to bring out that film, I think it was important for Brian to see. If we all could go back and see ourselves at a certain point in our lives, we probably would be shocked that we aren't what we thought we were.

I think, too, for Brian to see himself not as the 'Brian Kinney Power Top' creation that he made himself into, but to rediscover the other parts of himself was actually quite touching.

I, too, can't wait to see where you take them from here.

Deb

P.S. And, that photo is so sexy.

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gaedhal June 23 2006, 21:48:26 UTC
I love that picture because it's Brian totally
letting go sexually -- which was what I wanted
to convey.

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