"253 Creekside Canyon" 25

Jun 23, 2006 01:46

Watching the past.

Part 25 )

ron, brian, fic, qaf, creekside canyon

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jmf5631 June 23 2006, 20:45:32 UTC
Loved it, loved it, loved it!!

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gaedhal June 23 2006, 22:45:53 UTC
I'll check in on Brian and Ron periodically to
see how the relationship is progressing!

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mdlaw June 24 2006, 00:28:12 UTC
I just can't like Ron at all. Strange because I really like Reynolds. m

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blkandwhtcat July 5 2006, 07:12:53 UTC
I loved this chapter, Gael. I wondered how you were going to write Brian seeing the video, and I really like what you did with it. To me, the most significant part of the entire chapter was this:

He never thought he knew how to make love until... until so much later. But he'd known how to do it all along. Here was the proof on the television screen before him. He'd done it with Ron.

I'm so glad that Brian saw that. Now he sees proof that the emotional connection he experienced with Justin wasn't some fluke, or some first-and-only type thing. He's always known how to love, but he's just repressed that emotion for years. All he has to do is let himself feel it again.

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maroni September 2 2006, 17:57:53 UTC
Wow! Nice to see you're still around.
Missed your posts.

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kmboatright April 2 2013, 22:21:15 UTC
I hate Ron. For using Brian when he was 16, and for manipulating him now.

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