"253 Creekside Canyon" 11

Dec 09, 2005 16:26

Jimmy Hardy's Tennis Sunday

Part 11 )

ron, brian, fanfiction, jimmy, qaf, creekside canyon

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damietta December 9 2005, 22:58:52 UTC
I reiterate, I cannot stand Jimmy Hardy. And poor Tom Hanks has gotten the brunt of that hate. LOL!

Gossip is an interesting thing, isn't it? Half truths roll out as truths and then interpreted as the listeners want it to be. Evil town, Hollywood.

I do like the fact that Ron showed Brian off at brunch. Their trip home after Charles and Donnie's party must have continued their "discussion" from the pool.

Deb

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gaedhal December 10 2005, 05:33:25 UTC
Poor Tom Hanks!

Yes, Jimmy is still the same old creep he's always been!

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blkandwhtcat December 9 2005, 23:53:03 UTC
I want to see what "the boys" are up to, also! For once Jimmy is doing something I'm interested in! Provided, of course, he just wants to spy on them and doesn't interrupt or try to join in! Yuk. I have to say, Ron and Brian have some SERIOUS sexual chemistry here! Well, they always did, of course, in all the streams, but in this one it's explosive ( ... )

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wordsalone December 10 2005, 01:31:25 UTC
Now that's what I call feedback. Whoa. :-P

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blkandwhtcat December 10 2005, 02:23:30 UTC
LOL! Gael probably calls it "annoying the writer ( ... )

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wordsalone December 10 2005, 04:21:58 UTC
And that is remarkable to me. I'm not saying I always LIKE what Gael has Brian thinking or doing, but I always believe it, if that makes sense.

I get what you're saying. You believe it within the context of the stream. Brian's behavior isn't coming out of thin air...there's a reason for it which is why we can accept that it's happening.

And another thing I love about Gael's stories are the impecable continuity and attention to detail. All of those questions I'm wondering about? The thing is, I know that SHE already knows the answers to every one of them - and she knows how it will all play out. And the fact that Gael takes that kind of time and effort with her stories, and pays such attention to details, enhances the story she's telling and my enjoyment of it. I never find myself wondering, "how the fuck can THAT happen now, when this character said X or did Y five or six chapters ago?" Continuity issues make me crazy. Yes! She's VERY good with the continuity. I love that she always seems to know where she's going with all of ( ... )

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wordsalone December 10 2005, 01:38:53 UTC
Jimmy's an ass. He's just an ass. I hope he drowns in a swimming pool or something. And just like Deb said, all I can think about is Tom Hanks! It's becoming quite a problem. Thankfully, it hasn't ruined Sleepless in Seattle yet.

Now Dorian...I just feel bad for the guy.

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mnyclp December 11 2005, 01:08:18 UTC
Another great chapter. I am adoring the intense chemistry between Brian and Ron. This relationship as Cat said earlier just rings true. I'm loving the in charge confident Ron you have created. Now as for Jimmy I have this sick Love for him. He is so terrible that I can't wait for a chapter with him in it. I'm always wondering what he will do next, he is so annoyingly bad it's enjoyable to read about him. Can't wait for more

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gaedhal December 11 2005, 06:09:22 UTC
I love Jimmy's total egotism -- everything
is about him and he thinks that's correct!

He is, after all, America's Boy Next Door!

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