Turtle Story: Surprise Kisses Part 2

[g33kg1rl]

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The moment Raphael had pulled Leo from the container; Michelangelo had wanted to run to him. He had wanted to throw himself at him and hold him tight, help him stand, kiss him, cry against him; he just wanted to touch him. But Donnie had gently lifted his arm and held him back, offering a sad smile to him before they both looked back to

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[my_fool_took]

XD Yay! Raph and Don! *dances*
Can't wait for more!

[ffdemon]

*look at Don and Raph* FINALLY! *look at Leo and Mikey* YOU TOO. :D:D:D

The fist part between Don and Mikey is really cute.
I love the way you put the event of the movie with your own story.

*glare at Splinter*
You better not tear them any of them apart again…or else.

[g33kg1rl]

*giggles* yes, FINALLY. gah, they had a field day in my head with all the angst. THEY were the reason why it took so long.

and i love the first part XD Don and Mikey are so cute together! and i'm glad you liked my shmooshing it with the movie. i probably would have done a lot more with the 2003 tv series, but that would have to cover ALOT of events and... well... i'm impatient to see those two in bed XD though I do now want to write a story about the brothers when they get transported to the dinosaur time (all thanks to reasonabledist's great time!fic).

bleh, i'm rambling, thanks for the review! :D i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[lvsinsanity]

BWEE! *churrs happily*

This was so much angst and fluff it overloaded me! *laughs* I adore these two chapters so much! Now I wanna watch the movie again to totally see those parts!

I can't wait to read more from this, your series is just amazing!

A picture you say?

[g33kg1rl]

*grins* yes, a picture :D while I was writing out the end of this chapter where Raph and Don FINALLY get together; i had this random inspiration for a picture and started sketching (thus why i NOW keep a sketchbook by my computer, hee). the picure is actually for the next chapter cause it has to do with the... um... naughtier stuff that will happen... *coughs* but Donnie turned out adorable in it, so even if I don't get it colored in time; I will most certainly still post it for the next chapter update.

:) i'm so happy ya enjoyed it. I was actually really nervous posting this one. I wasn't sure if it was as good as I first thought ^_^``` thanks for the review! made me giggle and smile all big :D thank you!

~Melissa the Damgel

[geaven]

And here I am, stumbling in late again... *embarrassed shrug* Sorry.

Anyway, I'm so happy for the end of this chapter! When they started kissing, I was all like: "Squeeee!" and clapping my hands. And the fact that Donnie was the one who took the initiative didn't make it worse, rather the other way around. :)

Now I'm just a bit nervous about what Master Splinter's going to do. He can barely send Leo away AGAIN, can he? And he'll probably find out about Raph and Don, he always does. But you know what? If he decides to send Raph away, I can totally see Don standing up, putting his hand on Raph's shoulder and say: "If Raphael goes, I go too". Hah.

Also, I wonder about what Splinter said to Don that made him change his mind? Confusing.

Hope for a new update soon! (Today?)

[g33kg1rl]

*laughs* awe, don't feel bad about not reviewing on the posted date. late reviews are like late christmas presents! :D Good no matter when they arrive

[g33kg1rl]

(((( >.> it posted before i finished; how odd....))))

anyway: and thanks for your support! you've definitely helped me continue writing! :D love ya!

~Mel

[aloneindarknes7]

I think you did a wonderful job fitting this into the movie. It's actually believable and now I have to go back and free frame it to see Mikey cuddling butter and re-watch doctor!Donnie checking up on Raph. They can be together now! (ruined it for myself)