Turtle Story: First Time part 1

[g33kg1rl]

Author: Melissa the Damgel 
Series: Vindicated
Title: First Time
Pairing: Raph/Don
Rating: R
Summary: Some first times aren't always pleasent. 
Warning for this chapter: Fighting and bloodshed, and Angst-galore.
Author's Note: The boys are still 15 years old in this one.  (and I made the post too long >_<  It's in two parts again.)

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~First Time

Comments

[scoopgirl79]

I love your detail in this.. And how you wrote Donnie's expresstion on how he killed the ninja was awesome.. can't wait for more.. and i feel so sorry for him.. i hope raph can help him fix the problem even though they can't kiss or anything any more... I hope that they can sneek that in some where... :) We need some smut to make Donnie feel better... :) but again I love this story... :)

[g33kg1rl]

well the shower scene in the second part was sorta limish ^-^```` It ALMOST became smut, but Raph sort of smacked me upside the head and said "I NOT doing that to him when he's like THAT!" and so it changed.. but that's okay, i like it better this way. *Grins*

but thank you ^_^ i'm gladya enjoyed it. the way the ninja was jumping at Raph, and then later on when Raph was trying to get into the bathroom were the two parts in the entire story that were the most vivid in my mind and were the easiest to write.

thanks again for the review! :D

~Mel

[hoshitora]

Ouch... that really hurts... mew...