Comments | g33kg1rl: Turtle Story: They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy Ch.2 part 1

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Turtle Story: They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy Ch.2 part 1

Aug 05, 2010 19:06

Title: They Stumbled Toward Ecstasy
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Raph/Don
Disclaimer: I don't own the turtles.
Summary: They make a great team - both as colleagues and lovers. The work is intense, the sex is amazing; but Donatello is hiding something, refusing Raphael the one thing that should be so easy to give at this point. What happened to him?
Warnings: ( Read more... )

pairings: raphxdon, rating: nc-17, fanfic, ninja turtles, they stumbled toward ecstasy, angst

Comments 6

robina1984 August 6 2010, 02:20:12 UTC

I told you how powerful this was right? Just...the depth of Don's despair, the way things circle around the four of them still unsaid, the fightig and all....it grabs you, holds on an makes you see it. My heart aches for them all. Excellent work.

rikuman August 6 2010, 04:47:27 UTC

Whoops, sorry! xD I sent my comment as a reply to you accidentally.

I'm so good with LJ, obviously.

g33kg1rl August 6 2010, 13:37:23 UTC

;) you flatterer you~ *soaks it up*

rikuman August 6 2010, 04:46:23 UTC

I'm so confused and yet so interested! I can't wait for the next chapter. C:

<3

g33kg1rl August 6 2010, 13:36:35 UTC

XD sorry, I'm a confusing person... but yes, it all gets explained eventually ;)

And i'm happy you like it! :D

aloneindarknes7 August 6 2010, 05:13:50 UTC

Okay, halfway through this chapter, about the part where Leo was watching Don yell at Raph, I figured out that Leo was the one who emotionally hurt Don to be unable to say "I love you" to Raph. This fic is so amazing already and so passionate! Goodness, I'm almost overwhelmed by all the emotion!