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[futurebird]

This is central park. I'm REALLY unhappy with this one. It's crappy but I can't explain why. Can you?

*sigh*

Comments

[akajules]

I'm not fond of the colors on the ground.

[nextstopparis]

yeah, same.
but it's beautiful, besides that.

[futurebird]

Maybe I can take them out in some way-- is it worth using various washes to drown them out?

[misheiru]

I enjoy the gound coloring, but i think the tree branches might be a tad too thick on the trees near the wall (as in there are not enough twig sized braches). Maybe adding a slight blue wash over the grey of the buildings in the background to give a bit of the ol' atmospheric perspective.

[grayden]

well you pretty much know how I'd "improve" it... ;-)

[futurebird]

When will I learn the secrect to art you have tried to show me for so long?

[daiwainscott]

I like the colors on the ground. If they went away the painting would look too dull.

[ladyfunk]

i think its the shadows, but not such a big deal.

i think its really good.

[perksof]