FIC: Things That Go Bump (MomoKai)

[prillalar]

Title: Things That Go Bump
Recipient's Name: happiestwhen
Author: prillalar
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 7400
Pairing: Momo/Kaidoh
Warnings: none
Author's Notes: happiestwhen, I'm so pleased I got to write for you! I hope you enjoy the dorky boys. :) Thanks to MA for beta!
Summary: Ghosts, shaved ice, and cat videos. But mostly ghosts.

Comments

[absolutehymn007]

Ahahaha Momo, you're so mean!

Poor Parrot. I lol'ed at the 'listing to starboard or was that port?' part.

"They just needed to do what professional ghost detectives did: examine the situation, get some ghost-removal equipment, and take out the spirit, all while looking ruggedly handsome and devil-may-care." XDDD Love it love it!

Aw, darn, grape shaved ice spilled on book!

The kiss! It was sweet in a bit of a humorous way :)

I love how Momo kept reassuring that it was a trick of the light. But darn, he lost to Arai in the end. Try harder Momo!

And Kaidou dressed up in all of his charms and such to ward off the ghost was so silly.

Fun story! :D

[prillalar]

Poor Momo, he's not as nice as he thinks he is! But by middle school boy standards, he's not too bad. :D

They should totally grow up to be ghost hunters -- they'll get the devil-may-care bit down after a few years.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I had a lot of fun working on it. :)

[cellia]

lol Momo is not the nice one, but his was awfully cute. I'm even fine with him escaping justice at the end :D

[prillalar]

He didn't get his comeuppance, it's true! Hopefully by the time Kaidoh works it all out, he's already too hooked on Momo's sweet loving to do more than beat him up a little. :)

[happiestwhen]

OMG. I am on vacation right now but am saving this to my phone and am very very excited to read!!

[prillalar]

I hope it meets your vacation reading needs! (There may not be enough ripped bodices, however.) Enjoy your time off!

[perkyandproud]

Oh, Momo! LOL!

Fake ghost promoter taken down by a fake ghost. That was classic :-)

And Horio...a one boy crowd.

The kiss was so awkward and just right :-)

Except for Arai's cat videos getting so many hits, this was a fabulous story! (joking! *grin* even that was funny!)

[prillalar]

Live by the sword, die by the sword, Momo. Though if "die" means "get to make out with Kaidoh" maybe it's not so bad. :D

Hee! Arai needs to win at *something*.

So glad you enjoyed, Perky!

[happiestwhen]

I am so happy! This was delightful and everything I could have wanted. I love how Momo is so stupidly hyped up over the viral video trend and Kaidoh is paranoid and superstitious and adorable. The anklet! Their matching ghost charm bracelets!! Momo being the nice one! They are perfect. (As is Horio, of course. ♥)

Behind the door, Momo could still hear the first years: What if the ghost gets them? Then we'll have to take their places on the team!

In my head, I pictured Horio's eyes narrowing evilly as he rubs his hands together. Finally his day would come to wear a regulars jacket!

"Don't be late," Kaidoh growled, passing with his yakisoba bread.

"Don't be stupid."

Possibly the best Momokai exchange ever. Momo, you idiot. <33333333333333333333333333 I loved this so very much. Thank youuu!!!

[prillalar]

Many apologies for not replying to this in a timely fashion! I was so so so pleased you liked the story -- these boys are always way too much fun to write. And I was really glad to get to write for you! :)

And Horio, of course ♥