Fiction: No Thanks to Waffles and Cast Iron

[fujiidom]

Rating: M, but nothing too graphic, really.
Disclaimer: It's a rental.
Summary: Penny whacks Sheldon with a frying pan after he continues to inadvertently flirt with her over the real definition of "friends with benefits."

Comments

[starrywriter]

It was both amazing and very very well written!

Hooray!

[fujiidom]

You're amazing and equally as awesome at writing! HIGH FIVE!

THXSOMUCH! :p

[serenityveritas]

Hah! So, does that mean I get to request a fic too? :D

And yeah, it looks great! Though I did notice a few typos. Help! I can't stop betaing! :D

*hugs* Glad to see this up and so well received! I look forward to working on your next work ^_^ (when I'm not in the middle of midterms at least, gah!)

[fujiidom]

Absolutely!

OMG, me too I tend to just re-read and re-edit every few hours and always find something to correct?! I doesn't seem possible!

:D!!

[fujiidom]

Oh, dolphin noises! That's probably the greatest reaction I could hope for! Thanks so much!

And maybe ...someday!

[awmperry]

An extremely impressive piece of writing. In technical terms I found a lot to criticise - wobbly tenses, grammatical niggles, things like that - but the story was so well paced and built up that I found myself not really caring.

The real accomplishment, though, is having a sex scene that's all about character rather than the sex; it not only felt true to the characters, but it developed naturally out of both the canon and the setup in the story - and of course the frying pan as a catalyst worked well.

So yes. Could do with a bit of proofreading, but so good in all other respects that it doesn't really matter.

[fujiidom]

LOL, yeah. Like I said, this was total back-burner writing. You should've seen it before serenityveritas got a hold of it, it was rough ;)

It's too light for me to care about, really. I'd rather share with a few errors than obsess over cleaning it up (any more than already done), so whatever. It's a bit ridiculous a plot to begin with, being based around breakfast and throwaway comments about frying pans, HEE.

Thanks for reading!

[awmperry]

Absolutely. A cleanup would be advantageous when you get time - a story like this deserves to be polished - but it doesn't need it.

It's not that ridiculous, though - most of what happens in real life is ridiculous when one thinks about it, so extrapolating from that and using a ridiculous event as a catalyst for something like this can only be a good thing.

[fujiidom]

Yeah, I tend to do spring cleaning every so often. When that comes around, this'll be retooled plenty. I tend to edit whenever I reread, anyway, even just story-wise so I sometimes avoid doing that because I end up getting lost in rewrites pretty easily.

True. Though, drawing inspiration from Jim Parsons' overly theatrical jokes on Sheldon snapping out of it are probably a little less than normal. :D

[mrsvc]

YOU HAVE REDUCED ME TO A WOBBLY, INCOHERENT MASS OF GOO. WORDS NO WORK IN MAH BRAINZ NAO.

And I love you for it.

MARRY ME? PLEASE?

[fujiidom]

AWWW! THANK YOU! I'M HUMBLED BY YOUR GOO PUDDLING.

I THINK WE'VE ESTABLISHED THIS. damalur's commune idea is seeming eminent. I LOVE YOU, TOO, BASICALLY.

[mrsvc]

LOL, I forgot! Yes, we shall go to Utah and make a commune of Love and Awesome.

[fujiidom]

I'm not really a fan of the Middle of Nowheres, but I dig snowboarding. Maybe this commune could be cabin-shaped? We could find a nice timeshare ... LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.