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[Sporking] Never Say Never - Chapter 6 + 7

Jun 18, 2015 21:01

Welcome ba- *skims chapters 6 and 7*

...Fuck. I almost forgot this happened. Welp, gotta kill off Masaya somehow. And so, it’s time for fic!Masaya to have his final horrendous hurrah.
( Masaya dies in this instalment. Cause its that kind of shipping fic. )

warning: character bashing, sporking, warning: character death, fandom: tokyo mew mew, sporker: fufuyurifan, warning: abuse, fic: never say never

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kirby163 June 19 2015, 02:02:43 UTC

...Fuck. I almost forgot this happened. Welp, gotta kill off Masaya somehow. And so, it’s time for fic!Masaya to have his final horrendous hurrah.

Yay! Death~

"Yes, Deep Blue-sama." (AN I hope I used that right…)

...Everybody who hates when unnecessary Japanese honorifics are used in English fics raise your hand. o/

She slowly opened her eyes, only to find someone standing over her. It was Masaya.

Oh, I thought it was Dumblydore.

Ichigo blinked, realizing her true feelings.

*whispers* What is this warm feeling in my chest? Could it be... Heartburn?

"Let's just say we made an agreement."

*Godfather voice* He made her an offer she couldn't refuse.

He laughed maniacally. "I'll be back in a few minutes." He left the room.

*looks at clock* Look I was promised a death scene, is that still happening or...?

He stared into her chocolate brown eyes.

I think that fact she's terrified would be more important.

He lunged toward Masaya, grabbed him by the arm, and threw him into the wall. He summoned his dragon swords, lunged for a ( ... )

talonicefire June 21 2015, 11:56:41 UTC

which comes with being a perfectionist

I do not think that word means what you think it means, Suethor. It doesn't mean "being a socially awkward tween that has no balls to put herself out there and then not cry in the corner afterwards because you received no praise".

Oh brilliant. Now we have some sudden evil vague plotting.

Who is the alien that Masaya is talking to here? Does this alien ever get mentioned again? And why did they need to kill off Ichigo's parents? What did that have to do with anything? Especially because at that time, he's making out with Mint. So why do something that would put Ichigo into a highly needy situation then go off and make out with her friend, hoping that she won't find out? In fact, what does killing off her parents accomplish?

And why the hell am I putting more thought into this than the Suethor?

"She's such a bitch."So, why are you still friends with her after two years? If she was that much of a bitch, why didn't you drop her as soon as the Earth was saved? There's no reason to try to get ( ... )

talonicefire June 21 2015, 12:16:12 UTC

Are you sure you don’t like Twilight?

I bet that she only claims to hate Twilight because it's cool to hate Twilight.

He wanted to jump on her, hold her tight and never let go

Seeing Ichigo bounded up and beatened makes Kisshu want to jump her? Did the Suethor honestly just wrote this and NOT see how utterly wrong that is? I'd almost say that he enjoys seeing her broken and helpless... but that's silly, I'm just thinking of canon here! And we all know canon isn't relevant to this fic.

but everything went black, as Masaya hit him over the head with something solid and heavy

That is two times in two chapters in a row where Kisshu is knocked out to a blow to the head and is made completely useless. You'd think he'd get sick of this joke before it became a running gag for him.

Masaya dragged Kisshu over to a pillar in his roomInstead of just killing Kisshu? The guy who can teleport, or apparently has telepathy like every alien somehow has in this fic? Who could seriously mess up your plans because of either of these abilities? ( ... )