Welcome back! This chapter is a bit more sedate compared to the previous one. Still bad, mind, but compared to the last one, it’s gonna be smooth fucking sailing
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Cat- Sorry, no dialogue between me and other people today, I have a lot of work to do T.T
Okay, while the dialogues are incredibly stupid; it bothers me that the author was lazy enough to just give an excuse. A fanfic should take a while to write, what with editing and rewrites, like any other story. So, the fact that the author is pulling the time excuse like this makes me think that she isn't actually editing it at all and is just writing by the seat of her pants.
You tried to ruin my relationship with Masaya, which I'm over now.
"Cause he, like, raped me. But whatev's, let's be BFFs!"
But slit eyes don’t really scream “attractive”, they’re more dangerous than anything. Most characters that are designed with slit eyes are generally characters you would automatically assume are evil or are the sorts you would be wary of./
I have nothing to specific to say about this chapter, because it was just incredibly stupid. Everything was stupid. There's no break from the stupidity
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Cat- Sorry, no dialogue between me and other people today, I have a lot of work to do T.T
Okay, while the dialogues are incredibly stupid; it bothers me that the author was lazy enough to just give an excuse. A fanfic should take a while to write, what with editing and rewrites, like any other story. So, the fact that the author is pulling the time excuse like this makes me think that she isn't actually editing it at all and is just writing by the seat of her pants.
You tried to ruin my relationship with Masaya, which I'm over now.
"Cause he, like, raped me. But whatev's, let's be BFFs!"
But slit eyes don’t really scream “attractive”, they’re more dangerous than anything. Most characters that are designed with slit eyes are generally characters you would automatically assume are evil or are the sorts you would be wary of./
Like the Higurashi face! Fun times had by all~
When she opened the door, she was frightened at who she saw. "Hi, Ichigo." Masaya said with lust in his voice.His voice actor changed to ( ... )
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