Welcome back! This chapter is a bit more sedate compared to the previous one. Still bad, mind, but compared to the last one, it’s gonna be smooth fucking sailing
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I have nothing to specific to say about this chapter, because it was just incredibly stupid. Everything was stupid. There's no break from the stupidity.
I can sum this entire chapter up as "Well, Masaya gets beat up, the stupid tree-fucker deserves it. Kisshu and Ichigo are now together, yay! And everyone keeps interrupting them because I don't know what I'm meant to do now! What's a plot?"
There's really no point in any of the events happening here. The only thing that seems like it'll come up enough or lead to anything, is that letter from Mint. Which again, makes no sense. Why is she defending Masaya for his rape? I'd suspect that she was being lied to, but with how this fic is going, I doubt Mint even cared that Ichigo was raped. She just wuvs Masaya because... she does! And she hates Ichigo because Mint is apparently a bitch.
I would say more but this chapter was just really hard to get through. It's just stupid on top of more stupid. I'm not even sure what to say to anything here. It's not even really rage inducing because by now we already know that Masaya and Mint's characters are being completely shitted on, so there's only so many times you can get angry at that before reading it over and over just gets tiresome to deal with.
Also, I really hate these AN's in the fic. She's making comments about her own work like she's one of her own readers. How up herself is that? Getting "emotional" because she got her ship together is literally her patting herself on the back for it. Commenting negatively at the policeman when she wrote him that way and could have just edited her own fic to change that is just proving she isn't editing her work at all.
Good work, anyway~ And good luck on the chapters yet to come.
I can sum this entire chapter up as "Well, Masaya gets beat up, the stupid tree-fucker deserves it. Kisshu and Ichigo are now together, yay! And everyone keeps interrupting them because I don't know what I'm meant to do now! What's a plot?"
There's really no point in any of the events happening here. The only thing that seems like it'll come up enough or lead to anything, is that letter from Mint. Which again, makes no sense. Why is she defending Masaya for his rape? I'd suspect that she was being lied to, but with how this fic is going, I doubt Mint even cared that Ichigo was raped. She just wuvs Masaya because... she does! And she hates Ichigo because Mint is apparently a bitch.
I would say more but this chapter was just really hard to get through. It's just stupid on top of more stupid. I'm not even sure what to say to anything here. It's not even really rage inducing because by now we already know that Masaya and Mint's characters are being completely shitted on, so there's only so many times you can get angry at that before reading it over and over just gets tiresome to deal with.
Also, I really hate these AN's in the fic. She's making comments about her own work like she's one of her own readers. How up herself is that? Getting "emotional" because she got her ship together is literally her patting herself on the back for it. Commenting negatively at the policeman when she wrote him that way and could have just edited her own fic to change that is just proving she isn't editing her work at all.
Good work, anyway~ And good luck on the chapters yet to come.
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