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Marry You [Puck/Sam]

Feb 21, 2011 20:55

Title: Marry You
Autor: fuelledbydecay
Pairing: Puck/Sam
POV: 3rd person
Rating: PG
Warning: Slash, swearing
Spoilers: 2x08
Summary: Puck wants to marry Sam
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the charcters. Show belongs to Ryan Murphy. This is just written for my own entertainment

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fuelledbydecay February 22 2011, 20:10:15 UTC

Thank you :)

david_of_oz February 23 2011, 01:14:58 UTC

Very sweet! I'd love to see this grow into a future fic, though I think I'd like quite a lot more of the dating and fiancés at high school. And fiancés on the football team, and fiancés at regionals/nationals. I have nothing against mpreg at all, but somehow it doesn't feel right, here. Though that may be because it's too early-days in the exposition of this relationship. I reckon the boys are not actually out of character really: I kind of feel like how you've written them is how they'd be if this situation was really happening (in canon,I mean). I think their interactions, and the emotional displays/interactions are pretty much true to character if this love connexion had been made ( ... )

fuelledbydecay February 23 2011, 08:40:09 UTC

I definitely want to develop the relationship more, because it feels a little two-dimensional for me at the moment, so I would definitely like to do a fic focusing on that.

And I'm a little relieved that the characters aren't completely unrealistic because I was having trouble writing them, being so new to the fandom and all so thanks :)

I'll definitely conside those ideas in the future. Thank you so much for the feedback. It means a lot! I'll definitely try ot continue this!

david_of_oz August 3 2011, 05:02:42 UTC

"This is one of those territory things, isn't it?" Sam says knowingly as he pulls the plain t-shirt over his still damp skin, causing wet patches to seep across the front of the fabric. Puck can totally see Sam's pecks through the flimsy layer of clothing, erect from the cold and so very, very tempting.

Just re-read this before reading the sequel, and I just have to give you a beta-note: pecks. A couple of things. It's pec not peck because it's an abbreviation of pectoral muscle which has no k, and peck has a couple of other meanings already; and as it's a muscle it doesn't become erect. That would be the nipple.

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fuelledbydecay February 23 2011, 08:34:57 UTC

Waw, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it!

aussiegirl411 July 20 2011, 20:00:56 UTC

This was AMAZING! I loooved it. The guys were completely in character, you have nothing to worry about. You seriously need to hit me up when you continue this, cos I want more of this adorableness ^_^

fuelledbydecay July 22 2011, 18:30:36 UTC

Thank you so much. I actually just updated it. Even though it took me MONTHS to get round to it :)

ENJOYED IT asm613 August 20 2011, 15:20:54 UTC

(When he opens his locker he finds a deflated balloon and what can only be described as a teddy masacre waiting for him. He rummages through the little, furry, toy limbs until he finds enough space to shove his work in, taking one last look at the teddy bloodshed, he shrugs and shuts his locker. That's last time he buys a proposal package from Ebay.)

--that was very funny- imagining what sam's locker must have looked like and then how he mangled them and left them for puck- made me laugh. the whole 'territory thing' and sam would rather be pissed on was hilarious as well.

thanks for sharing