Leave a comment

emothy December 25 2006, 22:19:00 UTC
016. many nameless virtues. Tezuka/Fuji, in first person for once, which is unusual for me. Random ramblings trying to unravel Fuji's motives in first year.

-

From the first moment I saw you, I knew I had to have you. And I knew I could win you with tennis. Only when I asked you for a match did I realise a part of you might feel the same way; you said you wanted it too. I had never said to you that I wanted it, Tezuka. Only that it was something we should do. I never admitted I longed for a match, that I looked forward to it like nothing else ( ... )

Reply

vacivity December 25 2006, 22:23:07 UTC
...

You should write first person more often. Because wow.

I really love this.

Reply

fsop December 25 2006, 22:37:42 UTC
eh well, you know I was angsting last night; I cheered myself up the best superficial way I know how; episodes 174-176 ;) And it just came out! It's really unfinished thoughts to me, and there are sentences that beg expanding but I couldn't insert them into the train of thought. Someday I will be coherent and skilled enough with language to get the two of them across like I want to!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up