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emothy December 24 2006, 20:13:59 UTC
002. Everything you ever wished for. Tezuka/Fuji, set in hospital directly after Tezuka & Atobe's match.

Eventually this will be heavily edited or re-written. Serves me right for dreaming up the dialogue while in bed on the edge of sleep, and not writing any of it down before morning.

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Finally, everyone was gone from his sight. The doctor, the nurses, Ryuzaki-sensei and her worrying. Thank goodness his parents were out of town; both working, and had been unable to return to hover around him and say useless things in an attempt to be comforting. Tezuka's window was still uncovered, and the dark of the evening slipped in and went straight to his mind.

He heard the door open, though it was so slight it was obviously intended to go unnoticed. When he glanced over, he saw Fuji stood in front of the closed door, still in his club uniform after all these hours gone by, his head dipped low. Tezuka did not speak.

"I'm sorry." Fuji said, and he never whispered in a choked voice like that. Tezuka took a brief moment to wonder if he had ( ... )

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emothy December 24 2006, 20:15:19 UTC
More along the same lines that will be played around with.

---"I'm sorry... But I'm not asking you for your forgiveness. Not yet." He replied. "I feel so much guilt, and yet a part of me wants to shout at you so badly." The corners of his mouth try to curl up at that admission. "If only you had put your carefulness at the top of your list. But you do not. For all the caution you raise your team up under, you do not practice it enough yourself ( ... )

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vacivity December 24 2006, 20:22:53 UTC
oooooooh ohohohoh the last stuff. about the pain. oh that's so Fuji and so true and guh. Fuji, so cutting even when he is trying to apologize.

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fsop January 9 2007, 17:43:58 UTC
Further ramblings.

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"How is it you could know what the doctors did not?"

"Because I know you, and they don't." Fuji says simply. "They look at a chart, they see that your elbow is troubling you. They x-ray the elbow. You, too proud and stubborn to mention a niggling pain in your shoulder because it seems insignificant, say nothing more. They do not x-ray the shoulder, they do not probe further, ask questions, do tests." Fuji stops. "I watch you, I listen. I've become adept at hearing everything you do not say."

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