untitled [Gokusen, Uchiyama/Natsumi, prompt from brokemycaps]

Dec 26, 2008 19:50

I started writing this for a prompt from here, which was this:
"Gokusen - Uchi/Natsumi (Shin's sister) - Uchi is a somewhat bumbling boyfriend, which Natsumi thinks is endearing, and Shin plays the part of protective older brother."

But I have no idea where I was going to go with it (this is rather true of everything I write), and I'm now ( Read more... )

prompts:brokemycaps, pairing:uchiyama haruhiko/sawada natsumi, wordcount:501-1000, fandom:gokusen

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vacivity December 27 2008, 03:17:23 UTC
I really liked the flow of: (a great friend, a generally good guy, but not boyfriend material, not for his sister, not at all). It just sounds good. :D

I can see why it'd be hard to continue; it seems to ramble a bit, eith little "where is it going and how is it getting there". But it is fixable! We'll toss some ideas around eventually. ;)

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