Abridged, Part One [Prince of Tennis: Yanagi, Yukimura, Sanada, Inui]

[fsop]

title: Abridged, Part One.
characters: Yanagi, Yukimura, Sanada, Inui.
inspiration: Prompts from here, more specifically:
50_darkfics (63) - Masterpiece, 100_leitmotifs (73) - the sum of its parts, and 100_leitmotifs (90) - oubliette.
notes: 2330 words. Cathryn read it over for me and insisted it can stand as it is. And though I usually hate the way I end things and rush them and

Comments

[vacivity]

Everyone else comes neatly wrapped in little boxes. Akaya's, Yanagi decides in a moment of whimsy, has a blue ribbon, while Genichirou's is red. This line is perfect. It's very fitting, and somehow very Yanagi. And very teenageish in feeling, him assigning them colored ribbons. I love it.

Sanada and Kirihara would lose control of their emotions completely and degenerate from yelling to nearly coming to blows in a silent fight over who cared more. Showing the similiarities between the two of them. yes yes yes! This is only the beginning of why I love Sanada here so much; he's losing his temper and being so childish but it's so right <3

his position would be between them, a human blockade for hot-tempers Poor Yanagi. I think I pity him more in this than I do Sanada. He wants to be getting something from Yukimura but can't, because he's got to be between them.

And oh, the fact that Yanagi thought about = amazing.

He often defers to Yanagi in moments when his emotions threaten to engulf him completely. ajkfasjfsfssajkfsjkf EM! I

[fsop]

I love Sanada; he just slotted his way into the three-way friendship effortlessly and wrote HIMSELF; I was so prepared for it to become about Yanagi's crazy quest to scoop Yukimura into a box and have him all labeled and figured out, predictable like everyone else. Finding ways to create his own facts because what nature was offering him just wasn't enough or wasn't quite RIGHT. And then Sanada got all cute and clueless and hung around like a lost puppy and n'awwww *pets him*.

I'm going to try very hard to write more I swear! I loved my premise so much.

[postingwhore]

I like this perspective on troika! The dyanmics make me XDDDDD, and I'm looking forward to more. :)))

[fsop]

Thank you! I didn't think too much when I started writing, I just sort of let whatever came out, happen. And I'm quite pleased with the resulting dynamics myself :D

[mlina]

Okay. So I wonder why you need me to write stuff for you when you pull out stuff like THIS. XP

EM. MORE.

[emothy]

BECAUSE IT WAS THREE YEARS AGO AND I WAS STUCK ON IT EVEN THEN AND I HAVE NO IDEA HOW TO GET THAT WRITING BACK!

(And why should I do all the work in writing? I enjoy reading good things too! XD)