[ oneshot ] The Effectiveness of Lists [ France/Spain, AU, Hetalia ]

May 19, 2010 16:41

Title: The Effectiveness of Lists
Author: frostberryjam
Rated: PG
Pairing: France/Spain (Hetalia)
Words: 2,100
Warnings: AU, human names, possible mild OOC -- YMMV.
Summary: Francis’s past catches up with him. What do you do when the person you’re interested in knows you’ve slept with half of campus?
Author Notes: For suxing‘s birthday, although, uh, I apologize ( Read more... )

hetalia: france/spain, hetalia, type: oneshot, rated: pg

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inuyashacooks May 19 2010, 22:28:29 UTC
oh christ on a cracker man. every time. 8|. ahem ahem this was, as the previous words imply, really awesome.

i say this every time i review something of yours, but the charactersssss- just the way you write france especially- its exactly him (actually i cant decide if i like the way you wrote france or spain better here). and there are so many little one-liners and descriptions here that i could point out, but will not in favor of saving space and saying WIN. reading stuff like this makes me remember how awesome france/spain is :D

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frostberryjam May 20 2010, 17:18:22 UTC
You can say it as many times as you want, m'dear. ;D I don't get tired of it oh, hey, my head swelled up.

gasp I need to write more frain if you have to remember they're awesome. D; but ffs, I'm really happy that you liked it since I'm always left starry-eyed when I read your fics and going "Why can't I write like thaaaaat /whine"

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keitorin May 19 2010, 23:51:58 UTC
That was so, so lovely! I smirked at the Herakles hiding from Sadiq part.

As always, I adore your writing. <3

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frostberryjam May 20 2010, 17:19:27 UTC
He'll never admit it. but it's so obvious, come on, Herakles.

Thank you. ♥

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faerichylde May 20 2010, 00:05:42 UTC
wow.

uh.

you're gonna continue this, right?

because, seriously, this is the first time in my life i've understood france/spain. farrealz. it's really really good.

continue?? PLEASE??

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frostberryjam May 20 2010, 17:22:41 UTC
Really? First time? Ah, I'm über flattered. ♥ This will be continued, kinda, at some vague far-off point in the distance. But it'll definitely be continued. That trip to Europe needs to be written or I'll never be able to show my face at francexspain again.

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frostberryjam May 20 2010, 05:31:14 UTC
Well, thank you for taking out the time to stop by and drop me a line. :) That means a lot to me, as you can imagine, particularly if my writing gotcha hooked on France/Spain because, seriously, these boys don't get enough love together and it makes me angst in increasingly histrionic ways.

I hope your day gets better from here on. ♥

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frostberryjam May 20 2010, 05:29:07 UTC
Wish granted! :D I mean, you know, for now, since obviously it's still kind of TO BE CONTINUED /suspenseful music plays/

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