[ oneshot ] The Effectiveness of Lists [ France/Spain, AU, Hetalia ]

[frostberryjam]

Title: The Effectiveness of Lists
Author: frostberryjam
Rated: PG
Pairing: France/Spain (Hetalia)
Words: 2,100
Warnings: AU, human names, possible mild OOC -- YMMV.
Summary: Francis’s past catches up with him. What do you do when the person you’re interested in knows you’ve slept with half of campus?
Author Notes: For suxing‘s birthday, although, uh, I apologize

Comments

[disownmereturns]

Your Frain is LOVE. The tension is so palpable it's crawling off the screen in a really yummy way. The way you write these boys is amazing. :'3

[frostberryjam]

Ahah, thank you. /blush/ I love these two so much, INEF, and I'm so glad others like it too. ;D

[suxing]

SCREAMS

[suxing]

sooooooooooooo disregard my other comment in that other post b/c i clearly have the worst timing IN THE WORLD and uhh yeah /fail

... /goes to READ omggggggggg *________*

[frostberryjam]

/crosses fingers/ Hope you like! ♥ ... all I have to say is that France is going to have to do a LOT of groveling before Antonio is ready to even let him get some sweet Spanish love. :|

cuz, you know, when -- ... nvm, I'll prolly end up writing a sequel eventually so I may as well not spoil it.

[suxing]

Your Spain is my faaaaaaaaaavorite, end of story. I love that you retain his innocence, but still give him depth of character. All the little details! France being made of fail! Greece being a sexy bamf! And the little hints of Turkey/Greece! Oh, this makes me so happy~ Thank you so much for this lovely little ficlet, it's totally made my night. ♥

"I'll prolly end up writing a sequel eventually so I may as well not spoil it."

THIS. Oh god please please please continue this, I would love you forever. /grovels

[frostberryjam]

did my geeky word power geek come out in this fic? Yes, yes it did.

♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it, I have such a great time writing these crazily complex guys.

[zedille]

so I don't know you either but I come out of lurkerdom now

This was so amazing and epic and wonderful, I really can't express how good it was. I love your Spain and your France - Spain in his obliviousness is perfect and France is just... France. And I love the way you write, with your one-liners and your descriptions and dialogues, and... <3

Poor Francis (probably should switch to human names now, lol), except he sort of deserves it. I love this AU and I really hope you write more in it! I was hoping you would so I was very happy when I saw this <3 I really want to see more of frustrated!Francis and oblivious!Antonio. And the conclusion of this story arc too.

*goes back to lurking now*

[frostberryjam]

no come back don't lurk I don't bite!

Oh, he certainly does deserve it, although I think personally Antonio's letting him have it easy. but oh, boy, I think that says more about me than about anything else. 8D Grovel, Francis, grovel!

Thank you for taking the time to comment. ♥

[yuuko_81]

I'm so happy you wrote some Frain again!! :DD It was lovely, so I hope this will have a second part soon!!!