Space They Cannot Touch

[frolicandfall]

Title: Chapter Three: Wise Words
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After a sleepless night and some encouragement from Chris, Dominic finally agrees to see Matthew. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. Thankfully.
Author's Notes: Underlined words are words that Dom has written down. Underlined, italic

Comments

[ophelia1971]

Fuck. You just broke my heart AGAIN! That's two chapters in a row. I'm gonna need to stock up on tissues to read this story!

Just so heart-wrenching. Matt having never left the hospital and being so desperate to see Dom. And your description of him when he appeared in Dom's doorway just floored me. I wanted to just grab him and wrap him up in love. Poor bastard.

And Dom...bless him. Despite his anger, he's still considering the idea that it was partly (or even equally) his fault.

Chris and Tom as pillars of strength in this - perfect casting. They're honest, fair and loving. Great men indeed.

xxx

[frolicandfall]

Fuck. You just broke my heart AGAIN!

I'm sowwy. I don't usually like hurting our boys, but I seem to be doing a lot of it lately. I get the impression Matt would be like a little lost boy in a situation like this and as much as I hate to write him suffering, I'm enjoying making him a little vulnerable.

Thanks for reading!

xxx

[herverylowness]

Damn! I want more! I feel really bad for both Matt and Dom in this but I really hope that Dom starts to get his hearing back. It's good though that Dom's finally letting Matt attempt to apologize.

[frolicandfall]

Yeah, there is definitely progress happening here. It's not going to be easy though.

[theyellow_daisy]

You've absolutely broken my heart here. This is wonderful and gorgeous, and lots of other things that I can't put into words. Very much looking forward to more :)

[frolicandfall]

Thanks sweetheart :)

I'm trying to write more at the moment but I keep getting distracted by exams.

[vegesoup]

Woah, I love this story so much! Well done dude! I can't wait for the next update. It's all so sad and beautiful and powerful! And what's better, I can't yet see how they're going to fix this...

[frolicandfall]

Thank you so much. That's a lovely thing to say.

Fixing it is going to be a long, painful process. That's all I can say.

[syntonicmemory]

This story is absolutely brilliant. It's gut-wrenching, and you explore so many facets of their personalities. It's not often that I read a fic and hang on every single word of an author's description like I do yours. Fantastic work. Looking very much forward to the next part!

[frolicandfall]

It's not often that I read a fic and hang on every single word of an author's description like I do yours.

*blushes*

Wow. That means a lot to me. Truly. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

Thank you so much.