Space They Cannot Touch

[frolicandfall]

Title: Chapter Three: Wise Words
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary: After a sleepless night and some encouragement from Chris, Dominic finally agrees to see Matthew. 
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. Thankfully.
Author's Notes: Underlined words are words that Dom has written down. Underlined, italic

Comments

[licklepickle]

Wow. Just wow. This is totally gorgous, the best angsty story I can ever remember reading. I'm totally hooked!
I'll be thinking about it all day. Beautiful :)

[frolicandfall]

Wow. Just wow. This is totally gorgous, the best angsty story I can ever remember reading.

I'm so touched that you feel that way. I haven't written much angst before and I was incredibly nervous about posting this. The response has been amazing, so thank you!

[head_o_rainbows]

I gotta remember to grab some tissues before reading this. The emotion in this is palpable. It hurts to read. But its beautiful.

[frolicandfall]

*hands you a box of tissues*

Thank you for reading :)

[deepseabed]

While reading this chapter, I felt myself starting sympathising with Matt. Though I don't understand what he did.

Matt has never been very good with mothers.

In that part, I really understood his feelings. I think I always have that kind of awkwardness in my mind.

Their conversation was painful. However, in a way, I think, if Dom had been able to hear and speak, the conversation might have been worse.
I would like to know how Matt had made plans to apologise.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :-)

[frolicandfall]

It's weird, isn't it, that Dom's situation probably made it easier to apologise. They have some tough conversations coming up as well.

I'm working on the next chapter right now :)

Thanks for commenting!

[lov3s]

I want M.O.R.E! Did I ever tell you that this story is simply the most amazing piece written? It captures the emotion of the characters perfectly! Hope to see more soooooooon! Cheers! (:

[frolicandfall]

Thanks so much! Glad you like it.

[semi_shadowed]

Wow, loved this so much. Poor Matt, he must be heartbroken :'( More soon please!!

[frolicandfall]

Yeah, Matt's going to suffer a bit I'm afraid.

Thanks for reading!