[fic: white collar] Lost Your Way

[frith_in_thorns]

Apparently I haven't posted any fic for nearly a month, unless you count the prompt drabbles. Not sure how that happened - no, actually, it's because I'm really bad at finishing fics without getting distracted by new!shiny!plot! at the moment. I started this one in April. *cries*

Title: Lost Your Way
Characters/Pairing: El, Neal, Peter; Gen with

Comments

[embroiderama]

Oh man, I LOVE this! I really like the way Neal's situation seems just slightly worrisome at first and then turns out be serious, with El realizing that in increments. And I just want to be El and snuggle up cold, wet, confused Neal in some blankets. ;)

[frith_in_thorns]

Eee, thank you! :D Apparently it takes me four hours to type up 2000 words... I'm glad that this story worked :)

[embroiderama]

It totally worked! And um, if you read my story tomorrow there are a couple of amusingly similar moments. LOL

[frith_in_thorns]

Ahaha, that happens to me all the time, I get ready to post something and found that someone else just wrote it XD

[rabidchild]

D'awwww,he's so cute and precious and woobie!!!! Loved this a lot.

[frith_in_thorns]

Sometimes I just really like writing poor (eta: I mean, more than usual :P) hurt Neal ;) I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you!

[saphirablue]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Elizabeth taking care of an hurt!Neal! =) \o/ ♥

I love this! Neal's confusion, Elizabeth's confusion, El taking care of Neal, getting him to the hospital, breaking his fall. ♥

*awww* The thought of Neal with his hair sticking up in every direction? *awwww*

Thank you very much for this fic! =)

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you! :D I love El to bits, and it was really fun to have her interacting with Neal like this. I'm really happy you liked this! ♥

[kanarek13]

Awwwwww... I've been waiting for your fill \o/ Heee... And, of course, I love it, you whump the boys so well and then wrap it in that shiny, exquisite comfort \o/ And Neal's state of being lost and confused - you've written it so well, it's almost palpable. Brava! :D

And yay for El being the first response team this time, she handled the situation perfectly. With both El and Peter around, I don't think anything serious will ever happen to Neal :D

Thank you for another wonderful story \o/

[frith_in_thorns]

Aww, thank you so much! I was thinking the other day that I don't write El enough, and then I remembered I had this fic half-written, so I went back to it :) And I really like writing disorientated!Neal. I'm very happy that you enjoyed reading!

[winterstar95]

Dazed and confused Neal is always lovely and then add in wonderful Elizabeth! Perfect!

[frith_in_thorns]

Thank you very much! I do love writing Neal like that :D