[fic: white collar] Lost Your Way

Jun 14, 2012 21:29

Apparently I haven't posted any fic for nearly a month, unless you count the prompt drabbles. Not sure how that happened - no, actually, it's because I'm really bad at finishing fics without getting distracted by new!shiny!plot! at the moment. I started this one in April. *cries*

Title: Lost Your Way
Characters/Pairing: El, Neal, Peter; Gen with ( Read more... )

fic: white collar, hc, white collar, fanfic, challenges, gen

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izzie7 June 14 2012, 21:53:47 UTC
Beautifully done!

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frith_in_thorns June 14 2012, 22:49:00 UTC
Thank you very much!

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kriadydragon June 14 2012, 21:55:38 UTC
I loved it! Poor disoriented Neal, but I loved that it was Peter's house he went to and that it was El that found him - no one mothers like El :D thank you so much for this.

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frith_in_thorns June 14 2012, 22:50:02 UTC
Thank you! I really love your prompts, they're massively fun to write to. I'm glad you enjoyed this! :)

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sholio June 14 2012, 23:16:13 UTC
Awwww! ♥ This was seriously adorable. I especially love Neal's insistence on finding Peter, because even he can't remember anything else about what he's supposed to be doing, he knows he needs to do that. Lovely El POV, and wonderful sense of affection and caring between all three of them.

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frith_in_thorns June 15 2012, 11:05:02 UTC
Thank you very much :) Yeah, Neal knows that Peter will be able to sort things out for him! And I'm especially glad that you liked how I wrote El. Thanks again!

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coffeethyme4me June 14 2012, 23:48:42 UTC
This is really lovely. I love how many times Neal asked for or said he was there to find Peter. If it's all right with you, I'm going to let this be pre-OT3 in my head. Or at least gen with permanent UST. Their relationship is something special, and I loved how you capitalized on that in this.

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coltdancer June 15 2012, 03:12:04 UTC
BAHAHA - I wondered how long it would take for someone to make that icon!

Not that I thought about it.

Or looked at it.

Or paused my media player in that same spot.

No.

Wasn't me.

Didn't do it.

Can't. Prove. Anything.

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frith_in_thorns June 15 2012, 11:09:30 UTC
Oh, feel free! :D I do ship them, but I prefer writing gen-ish plots. At any rate, I really, really love how much they care about each other.
Thank you very much!

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anonymous June 15 2012, 00:09:00 UTC
I loved this. I love how Neal knows that things will always work out if he gets to Peter's house.

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frith_in_thorns June 15 2012, 12:45:54 UTC
Thank you! Yeah, Neal knows Peter will be able to sort things out for him :)

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