Comments | fried_flamingo: Pirates of the Caribbean Drabble: Tangled

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Pirates of the Caribbean Drabble: Tangled

Mar 02, 2008 21:14

Title: Tangled
Author: Laura H fried_flamingoRating: PG ( Read more... )

Comments 8

salr323 March 2 2008, 21:17:15 UTC

This is fabulous! :)

Tarnished gold beneath a layer of grime and sin.

Oh, and isn't that just her through and through at this point?

If I press harder will I bleed? If I bleed will it be enough?

Oh the guilt and the angst. One of my favourite scenes in DMC - it promised so much... As always, wonderful. :)

fried_flamingo March 2 2008, 21:56:52 UTC

Ta, luv :)

So much guilt and angst and UST. Why oh why oh why coudn't they give us just a glimmer of that in AWE???

tuesday_suit March 2 2008, 21:18:02 UTC

Tarnished gold beneath a layer of grime and sin.

Per.fect. Oh, so lovely.

And this bit gave me the shivers:

I should’ve tied it back, she thinks. I should’ve tied it back before I killed him.

Brava.

fried_flamingo March 2 2008, 21:59:40 UTC

Thanks, hun!

LOL you put in extra italics and I forgot to italicise mine at all! Oh the irony! (fixed now)

tuesday_suit March 2 2008, 21:18:52 UTC

Oh, sod it. Extra italics. Grrrr.

blacklilac17 March 2 2008, 21:44:55 UTC

"I should’ve tied it back before I killed him." That was perfect! Very deep!

fried_flamingo March 2 2008, 22:00:15 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

awickedwench March 9 2008, 01:52:17 UTC

Tarnished gold beneath a layer of grime and sin. The rough hewn teeth are jagged.

This is wonderful! Loved it...and I'm also enjoying all the drabbles.