VeeRush [ 9 / 12 ]

[freysan]

Title: VeeRush
Pairing: TaNakamaru (plus little JunDa and aKame maybe)
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Fluff, Humor
Chapter: [ 9 / 12 ]
Summary: Yuichi is a 24year-old virgin willing to get laid before he reaches 26 next month - I mean DESPERATE to get laid. Koki is a pimp who has no sexual preference, bedding both girls and guys. A perfect match made in hell. If

Comments

[freysan]

i bet even if she's not lying, you'll still break her neck, dear... *sweatdrop* i can't blame you, though...

Yucchi has his own share of mistake here, too... he's too kind for his own good sometimes... yes, i'm talking about the real Yucchi... (^-^)

[dorayaki_chan]

so bitter but i could not love it any less. i can really feel them both my poor poor TaNaka in my evil thought "i was really hoping that yuki is an evil in disguised , she's not that frail and innocent, and the child is not koki's. ha ha ha

[freysan]

a devil in disguise looking like a frail fallen angel..? no wonder she got Yucchi sympathy...

i want to say something but i won't... i can't, least you be spoiled... hahaha... i'm evil, too... (^.~)

[dorayaki_chan]

ha ha ha daijobu i have soft spot for something evil

[aoi_tenshi05]

argh!!! twin!!!! *squishes you*

i can't explain it but somehow... i find this chap the best... so far... *let's see in the last 3 chaps...

i mean... it's so heart-wrenching and yet it's so beautifully done...

or maybe... maybe... i can relate to Yucchi... >_<

twin, i love you so much for this... *group hug wth Yucchi*

[freysan]

whaaa~!!!
thanks for telling me that, twin... it meant a lot...
whether you really find this the best chappie or because you can relate to him... (T T)

btw, i like your icon here...
pouting Koki and innocent Yucchi...
(^-^)

[aoi_tenshi05]

*another group hug*

i'm not saying this to impress you or what but this chap really caught me... i even cried last night... (i printed this chap jst so you know)... i dunno... gaaaah~ the effects on me...

oh well... i find the icon funny... like they just had an LQ and Yucchi's not even paying attention to pouting Koki.. haha...

[freysan]

now i really love you, twin... actually, i alsowant to cry while writing this... also the other one before this... but yeah... another group hug, twin... \(^.^)/

and yucchi on that icon was like:
i'm cute, aren't I? btw, who's this beside me? *hmpfth*

[haruna_io]

Awww... Yucchi.. he always thinks about other's happiness before his own..
I'm so sorry the broke up...
*huggs and cuddles Yucchi*

As always I loved it! ^_^
Thanks for this new chapter! :)

Jya-
Haru

[freysan]

yes... (T T)
i bet the real Nakamaru Yuichi will do that, too...
he's too kind for his own good, really...

let's just cuddle him since that's all we can do for him right now...
thank you very much... (^-^)

[haruna_io]

yeah, I'm sure the real one will to it too...
I can't believe it... In the beginning I was a Kame fan, but slowly Maru won my heart... I can't image my daily life without his sweet smile :)
Actually I don't know why people say he doesn't stand out. Yucchi is UNIQUE!
*loves him with all her heart*

[freysan]

i started as a Jin-fan, too~!!! and i don't know how to say this, but i think they're right... you'll never see Yucchi until you pay attention... but once you do, you'll just have to have more of him... (^0^)

[snow_guardian]

T___T WHY!?
poor maru, poor koki...poor yuki?...
but i guess... maru did the right thing...
i REALLY REALLY hope that this will be a good ending,
i don't think i can bear a sad one, or a weird unfinish one...
why can't my TaNakamaru-ness be happy!? but that's what make this a GREAT story! ^^ the DRAMAs!

[freysan]

yes... it's like both Yucchi and Koki will hurt somebody despite any decision they make... only, Yucchi made that decision and took the first step... (T T)

i can't say anything as of now... but surely, this fic will not be unfinished... oh, and have you noticed..? i placed the wrong genre... fluff became drama somehow... i'm not really sorry, though... (^.~)