Fic: You fall freestyle (1/2)

Mar 30, 2010 08:01

Title: You fall freestyle
Author: frenhu
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/Jennifer Jareau
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No, they are not mine….“Criminal Minds” belongs to CBS.
Summary: You can hardly breathe. The air from your lungs is exiting your body like it’s never meant to be there.
Authors Note: After months, my muse got back and this is the ( Read more... )

fandom: criminal minds, pairing: emily/jj, fanfiction

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authorw March 30 2010, 07:34:59 UTC
This was GREAT!
So emotional, I love how you describe everything!

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frenhu March 31 2010, 13:45:56 UTC
Thanks, I hope you will like the next chapter as well! :)

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glee_addict March 30 2010, 12:11:14 UTC
really great!

hope you update really soon!

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frenhu March 31 2010, 13:46:19 UTC
I intend to! Thanks for the comment!

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meatisadelicacy March 30 2010, 15:22:26 UTC
Oh no he didn't! Can't he see how pretty she is? He really shouldn't try to kill pretty. I bet that sound was JJ kicking ass. Hopefully.

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frenhu March 31 2010, 13:46:58 UTC
See? You exactly get my point, she is really pretty :D But it was not JJ ;)

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sneaky_in_red March 30 2010, 16:31:54 UTC
beautiful! Can't wait for more.

welcome back. :D ((hugs))

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frenhu March 31 2010, 13:48:52 UTC
Oh, hello there!! Where have you been? And your writings??? I want to read something from you so get to the keyboard and don't let anyone disturb you until you come up with a nice Em/JJ story!! (I'm demanding, I know but hey, I love your fics!)

Hugging back!!

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sneaky_in_red March 31 2010, 16:08:17 UTC
I've been sick and pretty busy with the exams. Been reading and posting stuff through my iPod. I will have time to write some on Easter holiday. Just send me the coffee. ;) Thanks a lot. I love yours too, and I'm so glad you're back!

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the_dark_zodiac March 30 2010, 18:50:56 UTC
*salutes your muse*

I love it. A lovely bit of angst to brighten my day.

:D.

tdz.

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frenhu March 31 2010, 13:50:46 UTC
Haha, it could be only you who thinks that angst is brightening up a day :D Love you!!!

If my muse is back, I will pass it to you as well! I'm sure yours will come out from her hiding place right away!

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the_dark_zodiac April 1 2010, 09:35:03 UTC
*GRIN*

Yeah, I hope so, because I've got a Sassy fic to write for you [finished one part other 4 are bing pains in my arse] and the last few chapters of my other fic.

Jaw dropping icon btw.

tdz.

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