Fic: You fall freestyle (1/2)

[frenhu]

Title: You fall freestyle
Author: frenhu
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/Jennifer Jareau
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No, they are not mine….“Criminal Minds” belongs to CBS.
Summary: You can hardly breathe. The air from your lungs is exiting your body like it’s never meant to be there.
Authors Note: After months, my muse got back and this is the

Comments

[magic_markers09]

Wow, this is amazing. Beautifully written. Update coming soon I hope!?

[frenhu]

Lol, love your icon *smirk*

Yep, update is coming soon! Thanks for the feedback! Always makes my day!

[willowezra]

This was great. Can't wait to read the second half. After reading everyone's reply I see that some think it is Emily being choked. I thought it was actually JJ it was. Can't wait to see which of our beautiful ladies was at the other end of those nasty hands.

Thank you for sharing this great piece.

[frenhu]

Shhh, you are right, it was JJ! *wink* I'm glad you found it out!

Thank You for commenting!

[xixlovexgreenx]

Oh this was great!
But just to clearify... JJ is being choked to death, right? Cuz... when she is conjuring up memories Emily can't think of JJ's first day there... so it MUST be JJ...
Anyway... I want the second part of this like NOW. Just so you know. I love how you got into JJ's head and how everything slows down and yet speeds up. It's just so fitting. ♥ Love it. But now Em better be kicking some ass and rescues JJ. *nods* xD

[frenhu]

Yep, JJ is choked to death...God, this sounds bad. But watch out for the next part!

You want it now?? Where is my cookie? You promised me you will look for it....sooo????? I need a little encouragement in delicious cookies (just so you know what's my deal here)!!!

Haha, wait and see ;)

Hugs!

[cherokee62]

What a fantastic start! Such emotion...can't wait for the next installment.

thanks for sharing this.

[frenhu]

Thanks for reading and the support :) Glad you liked it!

[smr172]

can't wait for chap 2

[frenhu]

Thank you!! Will go now and write he next chapter!