Collision chapter 32

Nov 07, 2013 15:53

Chapter 32

Luke couldn’t believe what he was hearing. His mother wanted him to hook up with some random girl just so he could look heterosexual. Even if he was straight, he wouldn’t want to use somebody like that.

“Mom, no.” He said, his hands coming up defensively. “I really don’t want to start dating some poor girl. That’s the opposite of what ( Read more... )

atwt, luke snyder, lure, reid oliver, :author|artist: fremi08

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gypsiesheart November 7 2013, 15:09:09 UTC
The squinty douchebag is up to something I just know it!!!! He's after Luke for the fame and recognition and money!!!!!! The sleaze!!!!!!!!!!!

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fremi08 November 15 2013, 07:47:09 UTC
I love the way you think ;-). Keep an eye out for the next chapter!!

Thanks!

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dpracket November 7 2013, 15:42:21 UTC
Argh...LILY! :(

But Holden...awwww, so glad he loves Luke unconditionally.

Noah seems like he might be trouble. I wish Luke had gone with his first instinct of not leading him on. I'm so glad Casey is there.

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fremi08 November 15 2013, 07:47:56 UTC
First instincts usually are the best!

Thank you!!

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ramlr November 7 2013, 18:20:03 UTC
I just want to say i love your story.
Great writing and i love that you made Luke a soccer player.

I wonder what Casey and Luke are up to?

I just hope that Noah the douche is not coming between Luke and Reid. Can´t wait for the next chapter.

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fremi08 November 15 2013, 07:48:42 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind comment! I love hearing what you think. Next chapter is coming up!

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amyafa November 7 2013, 19:58:32 UTC
I am glad that Holden only just figured out that Luke was gay.
He is supportive now. In the show he knew but let Luke struggle with it all by himself.

Lily is terrible. Jeez time to process this information fine. But this is terrible.
She needs to grow up and not run away from her son when he is honest with her.

I am surprised Holden would just give Noah Luke his phone number.

I love Casey in your story. He is accepting, funny and a great help in showing Noah that this is not a date.

I hope Reid can come over soon.

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fremi08 November 15 2013, 07:50:56 UTC
I love Casey too and wanted him to make an appearance in this story.

Thank you!!

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parishs November 7 2013, 20:27:53 UTC
great chapter, the first part was exactly the same as Luke's coming out on the series, right? It brought back memories of a lifetime ago. Van did such a great job, he really made me an ATWT addict.

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fremi08 November 15 2013, 07:55:35 UTC
I don't know if it was the same on the show, to be honest. If it is, it's really a freaky coincidence :-). I watched the show on and off again for a few years. I really started following it again when Reid appeared.

Thanks!

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