post season 4 finale ficlet

May 28, 2008 21:54

Title: Stuck in a moment
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: none, errors all mine as ever
Rating: teen
Disclaimer: Nothing owned, no monetary profit made.
Summary: Ryan and Taylor’s relationship.

Thanks to Kazfloyd for the bunny that started these
Berkeley, summer 2013, just prior to Seth and Summer's wedding

The quote is from 'Imzadi' by Peter David
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post season 4 finale fic

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loracj May 28 2008, 21:53:49 UTC
Oh, you're killing me here. This is so good - that they would both still have their commitment issues and still want each other, though they've tried hard to move on.

{cyber hugs}

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 21:58:32 UTC
Phew! thank you. It was tricky tying all this up, 5 years was a bit of a stretch! I'm glad the themes were apparent.

Hugs appreciated:)

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indigorayne May 28 2008, 22:07:00 UTC
That was perfect! It was so...them.

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 22:11:30 UTC
Thank you:)

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nullsys May 28 2008, 22:07:44 UTC
I really like your talking:Ryan, openingUp:Ryan, even if it's only towards Tayler, but apparently not the Cohens.

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 22:12:27 UTC
Thanks
This Ryan, post season 4 does talk to the Cohens usually, the wedding is just making everyone a bit nuts:)

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mel39 May 28 2008, 22:08:58 UTC
That's so romantic! Sigh. Why is Ryan Atwood a fictional character?

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 22:13:37 UTC
Thanks, he is a super charcater to write for sure, so multi layered

(Rubs hands at the angsty wips soon to be revisited)

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60schic May 29 2008, 03:51:47 UTC
Ryan...fictional? What the hell are you talking about, woman!

And fred....I am so confused....where's the angst? Fred wrote happy....first she wrote sex, and now she writes happy. There is something wrong here.

But seriously...AW. After the beauty of their fortnight Paris, I am pleased that they have reconnected.

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:05:55 UTC
Thanks, where's the angst indeed?
Seriously, am shifting gears with a short drabble next...then wips, nods, crosses fingers;)

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jujuberry136 May 28 2008, 22:09:21 UTC
Oh that was perfect! And Ryan's reasons for breaking up with Joy and Sarah make so much sense given his history and "issues."

I love how you have Ryan and Taylor coming together, all broken alone but when they're together it somehow works.

Thanks again for sharing!

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 22:14:43 UTC
Thank so much for saying this made sense!

all broken alone but when they're together it somehow works. yes, I think that pretty much sums it up:)

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